|Reviews for Avent Fall|
| Daniel chapter 1 . 2/14
I love your continuation of Advent Rising, there were a few spelling and grammatical errors that I caught. Also, from an unnamed source, I have been told that the majority of the second advent rising would mainly be about Marin searching for Gideon, which would mean that she is well a ware that Gideon is not dead this could be written as somebody saying they spotted a human on another planet or she could know from the beginning of the story. Either way I still greatly enjoyed your chapter of Advent Rising
| Matt Alilkia chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Very good. You kept the atmosphere of the story. You need to increase the chapter length and follow Gideon's story as well because he is alive too. MA
| Great redwyrm chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
You must Contiue this story.
The Koroem command it!
| zombiewolf chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
sweet another advent story, I love them, this is the first one after the game, need more, more, now, fast, need, help me, need my story's, good, more, fast, now... Please?
Your Lord and Master