Reviews for Bete Noire
deactivated82940 chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Interesting take! His gender is a much bigger part of his identity than most people realize, and it's a taken for granted kind of thing.

Nicely done, and very thought provoking.
Epouvantable chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
How absolutely amazing. This story is believable and you have managed to capture deep emotions and confusion in Malik. I just loved this. It was touching and the ending was so perfect. Haven't ever read anything like this.
Celestial Reign chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Okay, first off, WOW, this was totally awesome! I loved every word of it! I think you do very well catching character's feelings, worries, problems, etc, and you portray it all so well. Most people can't do that, and you seem to do it almost effortlessly. This is definitely going to my faves. I'm off to read more from you! _

MochaCocaFan chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I honestly don't know what to say.

I can't think of any reason you only have two reviews so far.

This is so accurate in its portrayal of Malik that it's eerie.

His self-loathing is something that really hit home here. I felt my breath catching as I read those parts.

I do like the ending, though I'm not sure if it's a oneshot or otherwise.

BTW, you managed not to make it really offensive. Or offensive at all, really.
Cliscia chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
This is quite literally like finding

a diamond in the

middle of a rock mine.

The story is so positively canon

that is's almost eerie.

Your Malik is so beautifully written in the sense that

it's so in character!

If Yuugiou had continued in following Malik's life,

I really could

see this happening.

-mind you, I like the image of him male much more-


Aside from the decent grammar and correct spelling,

I am completely in awe with this!

Thank you for writing this fic!

It made my day!


Kim Okita chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Good fic!

Poor Malik Im curious about what he will said.

Keep going