|Reviews for Ninja Wizard|
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/27/2013
Look at shinji the good sharer's sharingan harry series here on fan fiction and ask for permission to use his combinations
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
Shunshin no jutsu is a transportation technique involving a swirl of leaves (leaf shunshin) or a puff of smoke (standard shunshin)
| esran chapter 5 . 3/13/2013
and then mcgonagal decides in a single day for literally no reason that her boss who she thought was a good person is secretyl evil. just... just no. this isnt even manipulative dumbledore, its incompetent stupid dumbledore. and why does harry dislike him so much anyway? he hasnt done anything. harry accused him of leaving him with the dursleys before he even knew who he was. this is just plain stupid.
| esran chapter 4 . 3/13/2013
far too much dumbledore bashing, and for little to no reason. i see no reason why dumbledore wouldnt knock after having been told too, or why he would be rude. he was never rude in the books, and even a manipulative dumbledore shouldnt be this stupid. for some reason authors always right 'manipulative dumbledore' as 'obviously and stupidly manipulative dumbledore who cant adapt whatsoever to any situation even slightly different than what happened in the books'
| esran chapter 3 . 3/13/2013
harry might be a little too powerful. i would have preffered it to just be him thinking hes using magic differently, and be more powerful because of training, but i didnt expect an 11 year old to be more powerful than death eaters who have fought their whole life. voldemort better be pretty powerful or this will get boring quickly.
| Diaboli Advotacus chapter 4 . 2/19/2013
Harry is British, so while I couldn't say anything from my own experience, I doubt he would mention the US President.
| Diaboli Advotacus chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
Leafswirl is Shunshin.
| ibterismith50 chapter 9 . 2/18/2013
Hope you are still writing and will finish this amazing story.
| Publicola chapter 9 . 1/5/2013
Though there are some issues with the characterization (Harry is too powerful, for one of his age) and plot (Dumbledore is too easily marginalized, especially since he'll probably be the main antagonist in such a fic as this), I consider this an excellent beginning. Even if you have to edit and repost some of these early chapters, I do hope this will be one of the stories you continue now that you've returned.
Incidentally, do you have any other "Harry learns magic before Hogwarts" letters" type stories that you'd recommend? I love the genre, but most tend to either abandoned or too low quality for my enjoyment. Many thanks!
| thesecrethunter chapter 8 . 11/3/2012
don't leave us hanging, continue this please !
| Toby860 chapter 9 . 8/22/2012
not bad at all but could you actually space out your lines. its written like its started from the left margin and doesn't change.
| Manga154 chapter 9 . 6/10/2012
my mind is blown! Thank you for the preview!
| Ethorin chapter 2 . 2/3/2012
the 'leaf swirl' in the 'leaf swirl technique' is an embellishment of the rapid movement technique Shunshin
| Dragonchild-hehi chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
i got about to the 8th chap and had to turn back. i like the writing but i just dont like profesor cat learning any jutsu. i love ur verson of harry though
| Stallion6 chapter 5 . 10/8/2011
Yo. I don't have an account, but I'm a Naruto and Harry Potter fan. Here's some element combinations.