Reviews for Treason
Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 9 . 9/15
Option D: I'm skimming over chunks every chapter, enough to get the gist of the fic but not enough to aggravate my sickness induced headache.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 4 . 6/27/2015
Your writing style could be a little smoother, but the whole idea is really cool.
lattyboo chapter 36 . 1/11/2015
that ending is too sad but it did have a god climax absolutely loved how realistic its seems
Guest chapter 10 . 12/22/2014
Shit that sex scene was amazing, i have a boner just think about it. But now my boy friend is going to kill me with sex for being a perverted uke. Not to mention you gave him plenty of new ideas for when we have sex. Love the virgin refrence reminds me of my first time. Anyway pray for my booty i dont think i'll be able to use it for a while after tonight.
reaper chapter 35 . 9/16/2014
please more a happy ending renij and ichigo need to be in each others arms
both great men and good for each other ichigo can over come the past to live happy normal live as renijs lover
kitty chapter 36 . 9/16/2014
yes finsh with happy it needs it bad i hate crying all the way to the end ireally would loved it more renij was so hot loyle and sexy and ichigo a fighter to the end both need to be in each others arms
kat chapter 36 . 9/16/2014
the worst is you loving some one and not being able to be loved by them matter it be death or loss memorys it is painful both ways and it will eat you up in side i had both he was hurt in car crash lost his memory i did as renji did and shortly later he died
BleacherAnon chapter 36 . 9/3/2014
Wait...was that really the ending?! UUURRGH! WTF! I wanted to love this fiction but I honestly feel numb right now. Why pour all this amazing Bleachiness into a story and not resolve it? First, this was the first Ren/Ichi where I loved Renji. I don't think he gets enough credit. I never understood why no one ever portrayed a bad ass Renji that could seduce, argue, and dominate Ichi (in a good way, hello tribal tattoos! ). However, this story had sooo much trauma, that it needed a ligh happy ending. Not one with Renji in angst. I know you writers are busy with other things but I read yaoi fanfiction because for some reason the anime world doesn't seem to get that I (woman) love hot older guys, action, AND romance. So please write a sequel, there are some unresolved points. Like the whole Hichigo/Ichi thing, btw I really wanted Ren to show Hichi whose in control of this relationship. Hichi needed to be put in his place. And we all want to know what will happen next! Will Soul Society accept Ichi, and I really think we should see Renji struggling to accept what happened to him?! I mean Ren was emasculated but he cannot be Ichi's support at a time like this! Can someone please write a sequel to this, we need closure?
reader chapter 36 . 8/13/2014
me too chapter 31 . 7/7/2014
i think i have a REEEEAAALLLY similar taste in yaoi u know!
wow chapter 28 . 7/7/2014
ammmmmmmaaaaaazzzzzziiiiiiinnnngggg! i ToTALLY LOVED it! KAWAAAIIII!
c lolz chapter 9 . 7/6/2014
how can u even think abt a? c of coz!
b pls chapter 8 . 7/6/2014
bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb baby baby yayyay bbb
love yay chapter 7 . 7/6/2014
cccccccccccccc pweeeeeeeeeeze! cccccccccccccccc!
yippiee chapter 6 . 7/6/2014
i luv rape! yay! yay!
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