|Reviews for Mixed Emotions|
| hyperactivatoragain chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
Such a good fic. Ahh. Refreshing.
| Saturn's Hikari chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Great job with Billy's voice. Wicked deformed bones is such a great line.
You're gonna continue this right? PLEASE?
There's forshadowing and anger and it's so unfinished at the moment.
And I really have no idea what's going on in Civil War- like that part with the Hulk- no clue.
But it's really manageable to get on without it and I really really realy want more Billy.
And some T
Because you KNOW Teddy's going after him. It's totally inconcivable that he wouldn't!
| markmark261 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Well written and characterised as always. Enjoyed it, although, since I've not been reading FF recently the last line was probably wasted on me. Liked the Hulk theory and especially liked Stark's line about US jurisdiction.
On the picky front, "bet up bad guys" should have been "beat up bad guys", "huck it at the force field" should have been "chuck it at the forcefield" and "dont" needs an apostrophe.