Reviews for Twined Unknowns
my-spirit-animal-is-the-impala chapter 5 . 11/5/2016
I think Pelathon is crueler. He is definitely the psychotic one. Lethe, I think, just genuinely does not know any better. She seems ignorant of how mortals live. I ship her and Attis so much. Can't wait for the update!
rebelreject7rambo chapter 5 . 8/16/2015
Continue please
Keiten chapter 5 . 5/4/2014
Namealex chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
I loved it..dude try updating new chapters twice a week,plot or no plot,i'm enjoyin it
Dlkg chapter 5 . 6/28/2010
que lindo e interesante, bueno, contininualo pronto, y que Dios el unico verdadero te cuide
misssilivren chapter 5 . 10/31/2008
i really really really love this fic. there is nothing in the Greek myths about Hades and Persephones children, if they even had any.

I think that I prefer Lethe over Pelaton. He just seemed a bit to soon!
xIfitsLovelyx chapter 5 . 10/18/2008
nno! please update soon!
xIfitsLovelyx chapter 4 . 10/18/2008
i really like this story! will keep reading

ps, what is Pantheon like? r u going to describe him more?
The Wallaby chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Hi. This is my other account, the first being... well, I told you on Facebook today already, so yeah. You SHOULD know who I am. 8D.

I WAS going to start stalker-reviewing you, until I remembered the fact that I haven't read Eragon yet. I'll try to get and finish it... :P

Anyways, I'm only reviewing this one for now because... it's the only one in which the characters are NOT totally unknown to me. XD.

So damn, girl, you can really write. The way you portray the characters, they seem so fucking sexy. (Fangirlness kicking in, sorry.) You make me feel like a dork now ._. And you never told me when we were at CTY!

I'm looking forward to the next update...

- W
DESIREeZzzz chapter 5 . 9/6/2008
awesome. PLEASE write the sixth chapter soon! D:
Lady Jamie chapter 5 . 8/18/2008
great story so far...

Can't wait to see what their duties will be?

I like that your staying true to the fecklesness of the gods. so great story.

Can't wait for next chapter

charleymiamore chapter 5 . 8/4/2008

Hmm... Attis... first time I've heard of him, thanks for the info.. but then in my country that name is the name of a fruit.. anyway, this chapter's intriguing...made my thoughts fly away at a direction you probably aren't thinking of...anyway, please continue, it's an interesting part of the twins' lives...

I have a request, though...put in Hades next time...although it's not winter yet and the twins are enjoying their first spring...but I missed him...sort of...
sock098 chapter 5 . 8/4/2008


Okay. You pulled off the cruelty factor VERY well. Hmm. There goes any hope of me "connecting" with your main characters. xD; I still think they're great though, only now I can't like them. Who likes Greek mythology for the nice characters, anyway?

Meh. Did you have to give Attis dark hair and hazel eyes? That reminds me too much of a certain somebody else whom you write about. S

Well, I'm hooked. Keep writing! DD
Lady Silvermaine chapter 4 . 8/1/2008
a wonderful story! update please!
charleymiamore chapter 4 . 7/31/2008
Hip-hip...hoRAY! the family returns!

well...all I can say is it's cool you've added a chapter (at last) and I shall be patient (veryy patient, I promise..) for the next one to arrive...yay!
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