|Reviews for Domestic|
| NothingHereButTags chapter 1 . 2/17
I have to review for two reasons. First of all, the story is great, and I've yet to find another author whose stories I'll religiously return to, and whose user name I remembered after a decade, which brings me my second point. One of those reviews from way back when below is an old account and I am scarred for life from what's on theredon't let fourteen year olds write Fanfiction! Haha!
| emmish chapter 4 . 9/28/2015
Blimey *_* That was very...intense ;)
| Sir Shirkin chapter 4 . 8/27/2013
I doubt Squall would have expected to be attacked like that before he was even truly home ;3 Love it. Pure, dark, smutty smut. You certainly capture these two very well ;3 The moment of excitement when I get the email about the chapter update 3 3
Is it... is it over though? x You put 'The End' instead of 'End' o0 3 You wouldn't let this die, would you? 3
| BatDemonKuronue123 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Once again, ten out of ten. A-fucking-mazing. I love it.
| Sir Shirkin chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
OMG! I was waiting for like ever for the third chapter. I almost thought there weren't going to be anymore D: On a whim I decided to check, and lo and behold! Another chapter 333 3 (Thinking back... I feel that now would be a great time to suscribe... Dunno why I didn't in the first place... Love all these chappys ;333 3 Will there be more? o0 3
| Amon2 chapter 3 . 7/5/2010
That was hot! Laguna so needy is perfect.
| Madisuzy chapter 3 . 7/5/2010
Oh I'm not throwing tomatoes at you for this! IT WAS AWESOME! So much so that I think I love you. Thank you so much for writing it. Laguna and Squall is my all time favourite pairing and there's just not enough of it out there. Especially really hot and sexy stuff like this. You are awesome!
| re-familiarize chapter 2 . 2/22/2010
Yeah. Basically. That is what your fics do to me. ALL OF THEM. I'm simply reviewing this one because it's the one that I read most recently.
Ngh. How do you do it, every time? I have probably read "Romance for Dummies" and "Wealth and Taste" 20 times each, and yet. And yet. You never fail to make the sex hot, the dynamic heartbreaking and fun, and... ugh, you've taken my words away from me, you magnificent person, you.
SO BASICALLY, WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY IS, I love your work. Never ever stop.
... Laguna really is a little slut for Squall, isn't he. We should probably show Laguna!uke!hater the light in that regard.
| Madisuzy chapter 2 . 11/17/2009
For writing this awesome story...I love you. *crawls back under rock*
| Agatsuma Ritsuka chapter 2 . 9/4/2009
LagunaUkeHater1; I'd like to inform you that we are very lucky SEIFER can get Squall to bottom. Squall doesn't bottom.
| Bourbon Waltz chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
lots of love-hate here. o:
and LOL, squall is NOT a bottom type
but people can pull it off sometimes.
i like these.
| DarkBombayAngel chapter 2 . 4/19/2009
Wow. So hot! I love it how possevive Squall is. -
| Kaerith chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
*jaw drop* Oh wow. I love possessive/dominant!Squall and I adore shamed/kinky!Guna, and the only thing that would make this better (imo) is some angst over the incest thing. Which, understandably, may have been a main theme in the aborted prequel. I read the second chapter first on LJ then read the first part, and while the second may be raunchier and sweatier, I admit I am more, er... /heated/ by 'Guna's angsting over his sudden and shameful desires. Of course, I do love to see our pretty boys torn by their own base and dirty yearnings just slightly more than I like seeing them all worked up and on the peak of sexual transcendency.
(Oh, and I also like those little tiny hints of schmoopiness between Squall and Laguna that reassure me that everything is consensual and based on love.)
I guess to sum everything up: Yay porn!
Awesome fic! I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
| Amon2 chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
The best Squall/Laguna fic i have ever read. The idea of a submissive, uke, masochistic laguna and a tough, seme, dominant ,merciless Squall is awesome. This story ROCKS. Please Update soon.
| 448735154768431646513164643213 chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
Yay for mindless LagunaXSquall sex! :D
I love your smut. Like, really love it.