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![]() ![]() ![]() Joyous occasions! We have another good crossover starting! I'm hoping that Harry doesn't become a ninja though he may pick up some skills maybe just charka manipulation to run faster... Can you imagine Harry killing for money and just because someone says so? Oh and personally I hope you keep romance off for a little while at least or build it slowly. Instead of BAM damn they're hot. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() O, this new story looks like it will be a fun one! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it . as for the pairing... I'm not to into slash Naruto so any of the girls in Naruto who are close to Harry's age I would like |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! New story, awesome! And you still manage to keep up with your current batch of work too. Heh, how you manage to stay that organized I have no idea. On a bit of an HP/Naru kick recently? *grins* Not bad at all, just a few words need edited like two to too, has to had, etc. No biggies just small things like that. Score: 5/5! |
![]() ![]() Woo! Another Crossover! ::Dances:: Iit! Un, about the pairing... could you make it Kabuto? I really like him and he doesn't really get anything more than camios in all of the stories I've read... Great chapter, I'll be waiting (rather impatiantly -~) for more! ~Nenagh |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very well written. I hope you continue shortly, I will be anxiously for more. Sending mischief your way! Snowfire the Kitsune |
![]() ![]() Firstly: I don't know whether I should hug you or try to strangle you for starting yet another new story. :D But apart from this, you once again did an amazing job at writing. I already like story from the first chapter on. I'll add it to my favourites :) There are some things which are still unclear for me: how old is Harry? Which year in Hogwarts did he just finish? (One can't really trust Kakashi's estimation as Harry usually looks younger, since he's so small, than he actually is...) As Sirius is obviously dead it should at least be after fifth year... Why did he leave the wizarding world? Is there a back story? I mean he decided to flee to Diagon Alley rather than contacting Dumbledore. And his friends? As for the Hidden Villages... As Kakashi thought Harry to be Sasuke, the time frame has to be at least post-'retrieve Sasuke mission'... Who is Harry's relative? Are you going with the often used idea of making him related to the Yondaime and Naruto, or do you have another idea? Perhaps make him an Uchiha? A Sarutobi? How is Harry going to get his wand back if the Sound took it away and he left without it? Will he be able to use Chakra and jutsus? As far as the pairing is concerned... I REALLY liked the Harry/Itachi in 'Dreams', but since you already brought him together with Kakashi why not just go with this pairing, since there hasn't really been any concrete development with this constellation in SWATTP yet. But depending on how old you make Harry, the age difference between him and Kakashi may make this a little bit difficult. If he's the same age as Naruto & co, maybe you could pair him with one of the Rookie 9(12). Maybe a Harry/Neji (both lost parents)... I don't think a Naruto/Harry would work. And don't get me started on Harry with one of the Kunoichi of Konoha... Well, anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you'll update soon. :) PS: When are you going to start writing MBaW again? Some time in the near future? Pretty please? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! Another xover! Great first chapter! Pairings?Hm..as long as it in no way involves Ginny I can stomach almost anything, though I definitly prefer slash, so I'll leave that up to others to decide. With me you'll probably end up with something like Kakashi/mask, Naruto/ramone and Harry/Hedwig. I'm a strange person in a strange mood... |
![]() ![]() ![]() :: Excellent beginning. It's giving me shivers just thinking about it. :: Nicely written, and very promising. I like the way you've started this crossover. It's unique and the characters don't seem flat. Congratulations, I'm hooked on only the first chapter, which doesn't happen very often with me. :: Looking forward to the rest. :: Hugs, ~Shi-koi~ :: |