You killed them on Percy Jackson's birthday! That is supposed to be a happy(-ish) day!

When Kronos isn't attacking.

I so love this story 3 next chap pleeeaaaaaassssssssssssssseee

well, I'm glad Sakura and Hiro was a no go. I'm partial to a Naruto/Hiro or even with Neji haha it could be fun for a triad if it would work with the story Neji being serious, Hiro a mix of the serious/fun guy and Naruto being the ball of sunshine we know.

Yo this is such a good story! I absolutely love how you write everyone and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Please include line breaks or something in between different sections. It's very frustrating to go from one paragraph to the next only to find there's been a time skip with no forewarning.

loved it more please

I really like it a lot! **

Me encantó todo es un buen fanfic

Applause

I am really enjoying this story, it is quite in depth and I find myself unable to stop reading once I start.

great chapter really looking forwards to the next

Shame the dating didn't lead to something more

Poor Harry, he just can't get a break. Sakura's being kinda stupid though, considering that Sasuke never paid her any attention of the romantic kind. She's in love with an idea of what could have been rather than what really was/is. Not smart. And now she's screwed up with Harry. Hope he talks IT out with Iruka and not let it get him down.

I liked the HarryXSakura pairing you were hinting at, I think they'd make a cute couple. But I can see your reasoning behind your choice too and it makes sense so no complaints here. If you are planning on pairing Harry with someone it makes me wonder who it will be.

Harry doesn't really have many female characters from Naruto he's interacted a lot with. The only ones he's had any kind of bonding with is Sakura, Tenten and Hinata. I'm just guessing here but I don't think you'll pair him with Hinata, if you're somewhat sticking with cannon timelines. I say somewhat because obviously Sasuke wasn't caught when Team 7 found him.

So that leaves Tenten and as I think about it that pairing makes me smile. Plus having the sword of Gryffindor with him and Tenten being a bit of a weapons nut enthusiast wouldn't hurt their possible relationship at all. Or you may introduce one of his female friends from home as they follow him there to get away from something.

Still, regardless of if you pair him with someone or not, I'm enjoying this story greatly. it's an interesting world you're building and I'm looking forward to reading how Harry changes future events in the Elemental countries. Keep up the good work.

Sakura should have just cut ties with Sasuke. Hiroshi would be a better fit for her. But, eh, Hiro might have a surprise or two for Sasuke of he gets free.