|Reviews for The day he changed|
| Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
I LOVE JET!
| Jen-Bot chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
You have great potential I can see it but I have to say two things one this story is a little graphic for K you should think of updating to T and you need to work on your writting a little more but keep at it I see great work in you.