|Reviews for Never Fade|
| blue talith chapter 18 . 6/9/2009
Well, it was a good story while it lasted! Yet, I feel that the epilogue let me down in a way or two. In that the author did not let on if ANY one survived the two riots. Just hinted at some things while not coming out and saying so specifically.
| David Fishwick chapter 18 . 10/26/2008
I thought this was a cool idea and I hope there is a sequel thanks for writing.
| desi393 chapter 18 . 12/12/2007
very reminiscent of Not Fade Away...not sure if that's a good thig since i had to fret over who lived and died in that alley (thanks for the comic spoilers by the way) as long as Xander and Will made it I guess we're cool...did they?
| desi393 chapter 14 . 12/12/2007
Ok Snake Pliskin, I can kinda see the resemblance there...Am I awesome or is it just me?
| desi393 chapter 12 . 12/12/2007
ha, funny I hadn't even gotten this far when we had our "evil Dead" dialogue, geez I shoulda never tried to outquote you! I don't think Xander looks like Bruce...Xander is way hotter, by the way thanks so much for adding him, he's one of my favs...even if the 'fun and games' are over for him.
Um...let's see...oh, yeah, what the hell is your problem with Faith! First you rip out her still beating heart (actually I'm not sure if it was beating or not, but it's more poetically gruesome my way;p)Then you have her entrails spilling out? Those belong on the inside. Now I did not mind when you eviscerated Billie but what the fuck, dude!
| desi393 chapter 11 . 12/12/2007
Aw c'mon, man, I adore Willow (not real big on Kennedy) but still, how could you make Willow go through that heartache twice. in the immortal words of Drake Demon, "You're just mean!"
| desi393 chapter 10 . 12/12/2007
It's fine if you wanna kill Buffy off but if Faith dies...
| desi393 chapter 4 . 12/12/2007
I happen to like dialogue and exposition...
| Allen Pitt chapter 18 . 11/17/2006
Great story all around-all acted in character-I liked the use of those tattoos that Lindsey used to hide from the senior partners.. any sequel - Connor definitely maybe Illyria as well... who runs the council now? Would Dawn develop Key-related powers? and all that. The last of the pre-Chosen "called" Slayers are now dead, would that affect the slayer line... and all that stuff...
| J chapter 18 . 10/22/2006
Its a pretty interesting idea, but I find myself a bit depressed, with pretty much the majority of these heroes in the Jossverse now dying in a blaze of glory. So I won't be reading a sequel. The tatoo thing was a good thing to lift from Lindsey, and better than the suicide pills you had us all think that they were.
| AscaDuin chapter 18 . 10/22/2006
Wow! Now that was a surprise that I wasn't expecting. I totally forgot about the spell that Lindsey used and that was an extremely intelligent and very misleading thing to put in the story. I'm glad at least someone is going to survive so that somebody knows what happened. It was a very good ending, it was emotional on many levels. You got to be sad, angry, happy, relieved and much more.
The story as a whole was very good. I enjoyed reading every minute of it. The chapters leading up to the fights were great as well as the fight chapters themselves. This is one of the best stories that I've ever read, lots of emotions, and good writing. I'm looking forward to see what you do next.
Thank you for the wonderful story and congratulations on finishing it.
| Allen Pitt chapter 15 . 10/17/2006
do the old chloroform her stunt? Or just plain give her the wrong coordinates for meeting the other scoobs? as is, she's too weakened to fight much anyway...and somebody should surive.. not that she'll thanks buffy for it...
Gee-looks like her, Dawn, and Connor are the survivors then-could make for an interesting sequel...
| Allen Pitt chapter 14 . 10/17/2006
Hm, this is why it would have been a good idea to have a few other slayers in reserve... on getting out of the W&H building? Simple! Just pull the fire alarm. then everybody leaves the building & they can slip out in the confusion. Ok, maybe not quite that easy, but tht's what I'd do-maybe add in phoning the police with a bomb threat, that's always a plus for the confusion making. Add in "And Ilona has been kidnapped by terrorists! We can't find her anywhere!" . That would be funny.
| AscaDuin chapter 14 . 10/16/2006
I loved how Andrew took care of Dawn so affectionatley (sp?). It was really sweet. Xander's story was very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens when the gang reunites so update soon!
| Allen Pitt chapter 13 . 10/14/2006
Good fights-I was hoping Dawn's blood would make the vamp explode, but oh well, this is good, too...