Reviews for Shadow Boy
Silverbell chapter 21 . 7/23
Your hard on for America was raging in this fic. Put it back in your pants please.
PetraAmaryllisAdams chapter 21 . 7/20
Okay to start off i loved it. It was an amazing story and i loved the idea. As a reader i thought it was a little rushed but i can understand that this was a fast pace storry. I enjoy your writing and i just want you to know that you should never stop.
Tree chapter 21 . 7/19
I think this fanfiction is a really good one and i congratulate you on it, i love all of the quotes, i looked up Ralph Waldo Emerson quotes and found my favorite to be the sorrow, worry, and faith quote.
Justice r chapter 21 . 7/3
I felt like crying and almost did on some chapters and you know you're reading a good story when u get emotional when reading it
Marianne C chapter 10 . 5/22
I'm dutch and I'd like to tell you that Google Translate isn't completely honest with you.
"What the hell were you thinking" "Wat de hel was je aan het denken?"
"Doing wandless magic like that in front of everybody" "Magie gebruiken zonder toverstok waar iedereen bij was"
Well, these are the best translations I can get you. It's not the exact same thing, but that's because Dutch grammar and stuff is... well it sucks. I've heard Dutch is the hardest language in the world.
I hope you got help from the translation. I like this story so far!
kajjjann chapter 21 . 5/17
One of the best stories I have read in a long time. I loved the original take on the whole twin-brother-of-Harry-Potter-wrongfully-thought-to-be-boy-who-lived. Don't get me wrong, I love those kind of stories, but it was really refreshing to see this new take. Also, I love all stories where families are formed not from blood but will, and stories where less appreciated characters get a chance to be seen double greatness in this fic. If anything could have been better it might have been the length, but it was still long enough to have an actual storyline and not feel to rushed. Great job!

/kajjjann
Mickey chapter 20 . 4/30
I really liked this story
Adrania chapter 21 . 4/16
That was a great story i loved it
NOJUSTNO chapter 16 . 4/3
great job you rock
wiccaantje xxx chapter 11 . 3/17
Sorry, didn't notice there was more dutch.
""Doend nam kleiner magie af de magie zoals dat voor iedereen."" This is completely butchered to the point that I didn't have any idea what you were talking about until I read the english sentence. Is google translate really that bad?

"Doing wandless magic like that in front of everybody."
"Stafloze magie doen op die manier voor iedereen." although again, literal translation, in dutch it would be more like "Stafloze magie doen waar iedereen dat kan zien." "Doing wandless magic where anyone can see."

Please change it. It's too butchered. Your sentence says (I included spelling errors) "Doingd take smaller magic down the magic for everyone like that." Please change it. Please. Pretty please?
wiccaantje xxx chapter 10 . 3/17
"Wat in het de hel was u denken?" Is not correct. The english translation of that would be something like: "What in the the hel thinking were you?" Het and de both mean the (amongst other things), het is generally the female the and de is generally the male the. Generally as in that there are rules where it is the other way around. Dutch is impossible to learn 100% correctly because of fucked up rules like that. Anyhow.

"Wat in de hel was je aan het denken?" Is the correct translation, although in dutch that sentence wouldn't be used. But they are translating so... If you are interessted, in dutch it would be "Waar zat je hoofd?" "Where was your head?".

Greetings and I like your story so far.
Guest chapter 20 . 3/17
what the hell is up with ff net's policy of copyright?
EmeraldGrey57 chapter 21 . 3/14
This was amazing! OH MY GOD! I loved it! Your writing was perfect and the characterization was brilliant! OH my god please write a sequel ahaha please! I don't even care what its about just like anything will do!
LnDrive chapter 6 . 2/26
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GotNoName123 chapter 21 . 2/25
Honestly this story is so amazing, the dialogue, the idea, the ending! Everything was just so amazing!
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