Reviews for Shadow Boy
daithi4377 chapter 11 . 11/24/2016
25points each and one detention for attacking unarmed students in a crowded great hall...that isn't even worth writing it down lol. But at least the attack and then everyone working to separate the boys took the focus off of Harry's slip up using windless.
daithi4377 chapter 10 . 11/24/2016
Fudge screwed up severely...I wonder if James knows that Simon is in the Headmasters office alive and well?
daithi4377 chapter 9 . 11/24/2016
He lets out the fact that he is a parseltongue? Why is Minerva all bent out if shape because the boys are entertaining the students...I think Dumbledore is putting too much emphasis on the songs the boys are playing.
daithi4377 chapter 8 . 11/24/2016
I vote for Luna since she hasn't been mentioned at all. Why do I get the idea that a lot if theses plans tonight are going to backfire and the four brothers will be the ones still standing after the chaos?
daithi4377 chapter 7 . 11/24/2016
I actually don't think the boys need to do anything Ron and Adam muck things up and do themselves a worse rep than the four brothers ever could. I find it interesting that Jake gets a detention for telling the truth about the candies being tainted and for pointing out that the Headmaster hasn't got a leg to stand on demanding to know what the brothers are doing over the holidays. I usually love Minerva she us a strong stand up women but this Minerva us no better than Fudge's Toad Umbridge.
daithi4377 chapter 6 . 11/24/2016
I figure the spy is either a student or the DADA teacher Prescott. Though the new teacher was a female which doesn't sound like someone who is Voldemorts spy and I can't see it being a student cause really the students in Hogwarts really aren't that smart to stay under the radar if the Conway brothers. I think it's amazing that they adored their twins then that Halloween night happened all if a sudden they have no problems throwing one away and dying blood to make sure any adoption could not be the same day they find out they made a mistake they want the other son back...and they just expect Harry to up and forgive and walk back into the Potter parents arms?...are they all there or quite a few bricks short of a wall lol.
daithi4377 chapter 5 . 11/24/2016
How did the boys father find out so fast from America? I know one of them sent a note but it's still America...unless he wasn't in America?
daithi4377 chapter 4 . 11/24/2016
What nearly fourteen years later James finally decides he wants his son back...just as he is announced at the BWL nah that no coincidence is it Lmao. I wonder if Dumbledore will even allow the duel to happen?
daithi4377 chapter 3 . 11/24/2016
Lol wonder why they decided to come back in the year of the toad?
FanfictionReader14 chapter 10 . 9/4/2016
As they were walking up, Professor Dumbledore walking in front of them, Drake couldn't help but to whisper to his brother. "Wat In het De hel was U denken?" (What in the hell were you thinking.) Drake hissed in Dutch. "Doend nam kleiner magie af De magie zoals dat voor iedereen." (Doing wand less magic like that in front of everybody.)
As someone from the netherlands i can tell you that both translations are wrong
What in the hell were you thinking wat in de hel was je aan het denken/wat in de hell dacht je &
Doing wand less magic like that in front of everybody magie zonder toverstok/toverstaf doen waar iedereen bij is. That are my best translations but i do know the struggle of the dutch language it is my lowest grade in school and english is my highest. P.S. i already love the story.
Guest chapter 20 . 8/15/2016
I liked the idea of not putting lyrics directly on your story but giving me enough info to youtube the songs or pull em outta my collection. i like listening to music while i read.
Silverbell chapter 21 . 7/23/2016
Your hard on for America was raging in this fic. Put it back in your pants please.
PetraAmaryllisAdams chapter 21 . 7/20/2016
Okay to start off i loved it. It was an amazing story and i loved the idea. As a reader i thought it was a little rushed but i can understand that this was a fast pace storry. I enjoy your writing and i just want you to know that you should never stop.
Tree chapter 21 . 7/19/2016
I think this fanfiction is a really good one and i congratulate you on it, i love all of the quotes, i looked up Ralph Waldo Emerson quotes and found my favorite to be the sorrow, worry, and faith quote.
Justice r chapter 21 . 7/3/2016
I felt like crying and almost did on some chapters and you know you're reading a good story when u get emotional when reading it
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