Reviews for Carpe Diem
Hibisha chapter 12 . 10/6/2014
That was an amazing piece of fanfic!
Jecki chapter 12 . 1/4/2011
:) i like the way you write x
GabZ chapter 12 . 10/19/2008
I LOVED IT!
Neena14 chapter 4 . 11/21/2007
Believe me when i sya that this fiction was Fabulous and very fascinating. Perfect!

i mean the story fold with humour, angst and utmost beauty!

your description was really marvellous and that lemon was best! i mean ive been here for three years and ive red almost every yaoi bba fic but such lemons are hard to find! it was AWESOME!

the ending was however not. i praised at the start and believe methat should be engraved and advertised for the fiction. it was fantastic! but you could have done alot more better at the end.

i read this fiction three week s or so ago so i dont remember very solid details but i do remember tht the end disapointed me somehow n it couldve cum as better. a hell lot better if you ask me!

there were some grammatical mistakes but the plot and the story and the romance was beatuifully fit. i seriously loved your story. its right down hard to get some good stuff to read these days.

im though a bit disappointed that u have no other bba story. do think of writing on pleas.e n make it even more angst.

on a side fangirl note; OMG Kai was adorable n soo sexy n kool! -gushes-

ahem, sorry about that but i couldnt help mentioning it. the story was unbelievably beautiful but the end really is a turn off compare to the initial chapters so try to re edit it.

n oh yeh, Tala was given quite a perfect persona. Kai was kinda same but Tala literally was given a wonderful personality. it fitted quite rightly n there did not seem too much OOC-ness either. you made him vulnerable, witty, frisky and lovable too! just adorable!

else than tht, else than that...hmm...i guess you could have really make that Tala dieing scene better n put some more angst scenes while suring boris meetings with them. n definitely the end should have been better. how many times have i said tht now?

okay now ill be off as ive babbled quite alot. good job miss bohemian. hey what does that mean, care to explain plz?

wish u luk n best wishes.

urs,

Neena
Lyson chapter 12 . 1/8/2007
very nice yayyaya for you!

But you know what would have been the super uber awesome lovely ness, if you ended it in a gallery with kai's art, and the main piece being a drawing of Tala...

but of course I've got Tala on the brain, you ending was also the awesomness!
Lyson chapter 10 . 1/8/2007
I was about to storm off screaming Ï HATE YOU but then of course Tala woke up...so another good chapter.

X
Lyson chapter 9 . 1/8/2007
very cool, but i can feel the suspense building...so i should go see where that leads!
Lyson chapter 8 . 1/8/2007
that was great, that was super awesome.

that was UBERsomeLYawesomeneSS!

kai and Tala are like heaven in a fanfic...*sighs dreamily*
Lyson chapter 7 . 1/8/2007
i like the way you made the first hint drop in...drunk Tala...feeling emotional...and horny! *grins* teenagers! lol.

on to the next!
Lyson chapter 6 . 1/8/2007
nice nice,

Tala's hyper for a possible casualty, but as loveable as ever.

on to the next chapter!
Lyson chapter 5 . 1/8/2007
i like it...boris must die!
Lyson chapter 4 . 1/8/2007
ah! i'm still enjoying it!

AH! Poor tala, my baby, i hate it when Boris touches him in any story, kai can take it but not my sweet cherry pop!

AH! anyway..thats over...on to read the next chappy!
Lyson chapter 3 . 1/8/2007
highly pleased, i know i am bacause when I'm happy my nose burns and my eyes tear *_*

Its a really cool story...bye now, more to read!
Lyson chapter 2 . 1/8/2007
I must admit, I'm just on this chapter, I'll review each chapter, unless i dislike a chappy!

but i so far like the plot and pace of the story, it isn't to rushed. looking forward to the rest so let me get there!

Lyson
XxxMidNighT chapter 12 . 1/3/2007
I loved it -sniff-. That pairing (Kai and Tala) is the best...and you pulled it off perfectly. Something I can only be found dreaming of dreaming doing it. I loved this story so much that it's going on my favourites and so are you ) your pretty talented. a cookie for you.
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