Reviews for Emily
moxxie23-deactivated chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
That was such a moving story. It's always sad to have to lose someone you love but what's even more devastating is to have conflicting emotions over losing them but gaining something else.

The story seemed real. It could happen to anyone at any point in time. And that's perhaps the reason why this moved me so much.

I loved how you made Carlito the lead. There's very few stories out there that have him as the lead and the few that does exist don't even portray him in this manner. I liked how you did flashbacks of sorts to tell his and Emma's story and had it culminate to the moment where he gets the news that was to change his life.

Amazing story. Great job!
Pinayprincesa chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
aw poor Carlito:( What is he going to do?
angel chick1589 chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
:'( that was a sad story. but good you know?
nychick4 chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
that so sad. i thought i was gunna cry when i heard the she died, but i loved it. it casue im in love with carito.
Take Me Back To Gallifrey chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
aww that was so sad but in a good way...if that makes sense. i hope you do a squel, it would be interesting to see how carlito copes with being a single dad.