|Reviews for Toleration|
| overninethousand chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
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| Dark-Night-Tigress chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
HAHAHA lolx5 trillion that is SO true! OMG, wow, thx, I neded that...haha...*giggle*
Just thought i'd check out your fanfic as well. You have skills madame, I applaud you. *clapping*
| YuucaOfTheRiseingMoon chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
| serenphoria chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Is the sentence that starts 'How he ended up...' suppose to be a question? Because it's not right now. And the last line didn't quite make sense. I think it would end more powerfully without it. Or add something to it like 'Rin laughed as she danced about' or something contrast-y with the image of the ice lord.
Not bad for your first fic here.