Reviews for Instead of Hurting You
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2016
DanS2015 chapter 3 . 1/3/2016
Nice story. Loved the ending.
Brenden chapter 3 . 11/27/2015
LilyWanKenobi chapter 3 . 6/8/2015
Wonderful! Love it!
AI chapter 3 . 6/7/2015
Yay marriage!
Gamoora chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
I just read through this and the four prequels. I really enjoyed the storyline. I particularly like how the Jedi are really working with Anakin and I like the OCs, including Kaeli. In fact, I find the Kaeli/Artoo interaction quite amusing. Of course if they became friends, think of all the chaos they would cause... And Padme finally admitted her feelings. And they're getting married! I'd love to see what happens. Anakin's still breaking the rules because he's too young in this universe, but since the Jedi here aren't as opposed to attachment as canon, I think it puts them in an interesting situation. I wonder what Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are going to say. ANyways, I know it's been over a decade, but if you ever do find the muse again, I would love to know what happens next.
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
good story
Hayden Avery chapter 3 . 5/11/2012
I love your stories, please please continue this with the sequel someday!
Pwyllugh chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
Yesterday and Today I read your whole series that started with "If I don't catch you" and I have to say it is really amazing!


I love it so much :-)

I love how Anakin is powerful but still is prone to mistakes. Just... great!

Btw, nice amount of humor in between the tension!
Lea1985 chapter 3 . 3/22/2012
great story !
JackFrost23 chapter 3 . 2/8/2012
OH my god please post a sequel please. What happens next
SilkenLady chapter 3 . 8/27/2011
I need a sequel!
T chapter 3 . 5/23/2010
I hope you write the sequel soon.
SPILAR chapter 3 . 11/21/2009
Wow fantastic story. Ive just real all four of them and i cant wait for more. I love how easy you make it to picture everything thats happening especially in fights which is where some people tend to lessen detail. Cant wait for many more sequels. Your fan

zafaran chapter 3 . 7/2/2009
Any chance of getting the next sequel? This story set is interesting and I'm saving it to ebook for rereading away from my computer, and would be very interested in seeing how Ani and Padme escape Palpatine's clutches on a long term basis, and how he is defeated in the end. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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