Reviews for A Good Day |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Although this is fine for a short story, you could have expanded it with the 2nd lead you dangled before us and could have created a more involved lengthy story, plus tying up your loose end. |
![]() ![]() Love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good as well! |
![]() ![]() A great addition to canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FABS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a night Tony had. HE got hurt but was able to help with a case that turned out to be bigger tban what tbey thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad that scouse mentioned by name that you were visiting and writing with her. Gave me a reason to go looking for your stories. This was a good one, by the way. Enjoyed it very much. I'll try to get to some more before the weekend is over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww great plot for a missing scene :-D nice ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A Good Day A Good Story. I thought this was a neat story, and the attitudes of Gibbs and Tony were good, especially the concern that a ceertain stubborn NCIS agent won't usually show. 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Love your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I remember this story! I read it over on LiveJournal—or one of those other fan fic sites I can't keep straight in my head. Haha. Sorry. At any rate, I love this piece. :) That ending always bothered me slightly. I like your continuation very much indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read your old stories in the course of the day and take my time now to review them one after the other. I love so much that you writers do such a great work with whumping, this is absolutely sold short in the TV series. And Hung out to dry is a lovely episode for an aftermath. But this was beyond that, a really new plot with more whumping than hoped for. Tony allures such bad luck. And this is always fun for us readers. Abby always manages what never one manages, mercifully for Tony. I like that Tony is portrayed as competent investigator and not as clown because Gibbs would not tolerate incompetence in the long run. But with Gibbs statement "You did good" everything was it worth for Tony. And I can only say the same to you: You did good (with this story and with all of your old stories). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Delightful bit of extra whumping :P |