Reviews for Kingdom Hearts: One More Vacation
randomadorablepikachu chapter 39 . 11/7/2014
Goddamn...
randomadorablepikachu chapter 35 . 11/7/2014
I don't believe you. You didn't kill Sora. Actually, you did, but I'd be willing to bet MONEY (if I had any) that you're gonna bring him back sometime before this trilogy ends.

WHEN DID THIS STORY BECOME SO FRIGGIN EMO I LOVE YOU YOU'RE EVIL LIKE SATAN *angstmode activated*
StringBean chapter 41 . 1/30/2012
May I just say, this was amazing.
Sora Tayuya chapter 41 . 11/17/2010
Ah, young love. *watches as Aisu kicks Axel in a fun place*

Haha, so this is the part where Axel (and the readers) find out about Vexen’s twins! Cool. But…I can’t tell (which is obviously how you planned and wrote it) if the other Nobodies have come back or not…AND WHY THE FREAK DID AXEL GET TO STAY BEHIND ANYWAY? I still am wondering about that…

Oh, a ninja baby…hahaha!

Oh jeez Cid…how can you Beeping back an entire Machina shop/Gummi Ship shop in 20 minutes? Well…I guess men are really good at last-minute procrastination…and really bad at planning. Or, at least the awesomeness that is Cid is. Hahaha!

So…Cid has gone into a mad fever of packing while everyone else slept in or has a huge hangover (or, in Auron’s case, is still wasted), and Cloud decides it will be faster to fill a ship if you just carve a HOLE into the floor and throw your stuff down using gravity. …nice.

Um…I’m just gonna tell Cloud that the paperwork is now packed. …apparently along with Auron. Good, because he is totally wasted and wasted people cannot move themselves. They must be packed instead. Hahaha.

…and all of Vincent’s worldly possessions…including Vincent himself…are now ‘packed’…

I must say, the hurriedly packing scene for your life was quite wonderful. Very classic stuff you got there. Oh the chicken…

…oh…I’m guessing…that in those 3 months that…the Nobodies haven’t returned…huh?...oh…that…is so incredibly sad…I at least had been hoping that they had come back soon…but to leave everyone hanging like this for months…oh wow…that…is so sad…[a reoccurring thing I shall hypothetically ask…WHY AXEL, WHY? I mean…seriously, why only did Axel stay?]

Aww, yay! Leon got to find Rinoa. That is nice.

Hmm…so Sora is chasing someone…hmm…

(In that joking-teasing voice Riku sometimes uses)Oh come on Sora…you can’t forget your own Nobody’s name so soon, can you?

Namine! Sweet…hehehe, this reunion (it is gonna happen, I know because I cheated and already know) should prove very, very swell…hehhe.

This is a very good, well written ending by the way. You are stringing everything together really well. I’m at Cloud’s part right now, and I appreciate the Zack mention.

*Eyes open widely* Sora’s room…is that…was that white creature…a lesser Nobody?

(Serious here, contemplative)Even though I know the ending…It’s funny, in a sense. As I read through what Yuna is doing, and what is going on with Sora all around while it is happening, I am…sad. I’m really sad, and it makes me sad to think of all of the people the Organization has touched in your story before this time. How many people they would leave behind in Your universe…I think, it’s really the most sad of all because…(gets kind of quiet)…maybe, because it is sad, that in their own, Canon, universe, people cared for them less than they do in your longer, extended, and more in-depth one. I guess, that just makes me…sad, to think about all of the people like that.

The scene with Cid and Barret was sweet. I actually wish I had played FinalFantasy before, Barret is so cool.

Aw, Victoria and Orpheus are doing alright! That is good.

Are you ready for this?(takes a deep breath)….DEEEEEEEMMMMMMYYYYYXXXXXXX!

Can’t help myself.

Dilan…(Xaldin)…Rould…(Luxord)…Xemnas…Roxas…Namine…Edym…(Demyx)…..did they…forget? Huh, maybe it is one of those “forget until you see that person/people from your past, then suddenly remember”…but still, this was a great build-up to this scene. I love the presentation, and how it is playing through. Really beautiful stuff.

…but why is Namine calling Axel…Lea? I’m kinda confused. Hmm…Even…(Vexen)…Braig…(Xigbar)…

…Lerean…(Larxene)…Sora is sad…I am too, I understand, Sora. Because…even after all this time you trying to forget them because it hurt…what if…they had forgotten you?

…Oh…Sora…gods, this is…I can’t even begin to describe how really, perfectly unique this scene is. This is such a rare moment in writing…you have executed it flawlessly…It is marvelous…true Genius….this part, with Sora feeling left out because those who he and so many others had loved…not only have been given life…but…forgotten their old lives? How sad…how horrible, to find a person who was your greatest friend alive once more, but not knowing your face…oh gods…how stricken with mixed emotions Sora must feel right then.

…but still, and seriously now, the question remains…..why did Axel Not fade away like them? Why is he there? …well, (attempts to chuckle), I guess…I will find out, if I keep reading…

…the story.

He…Roxas…remembered his…Own…name…!

Wow, that was a perfect ending, with Riku and all. The beginning of the Third Part makes complete and total sense now. AND, I am proud to officially see and say that you are a Demyx fan, and wish that he got a better ending than what he really got.

I think that now that I am done with the Whole Axelerate series…I need to celebrate. I shall go party now. And heck, in a few months, maybe I’ll go back and read the whole thing again. Some stories are just worth reading a time again. Some stories are timeless, haha, especially when dealing with Nobodies. Ex-Nobodies, to be precise, but still.

. . . . Demyx . . .Namine.

(Smiles.)

Thank you, Sulhadahne.
Sora Tayuya chapter 40 . 11/17/2010
Wait…Demy…what…what’s wrong with Demyx? His wounds…weren’t that bad…what’s going on? And Xigbar…well Paine, that was a perfect and very beautiful display of a very serious, sad, and emotional scene dealt with by a lovely jest at his attitude. What a nice scene that was, seriously. It was greatly put. I really, really liked it. The atmosphere was perfect.

…I am so lame. I have absolutely NO IDEA what Luxord and Xaldin are talking about. Dang. I love their awesome friendship too, so why can’t I freakin’ figure out what they are talking about!

Awww…Riku gets to bug Sora after Sora has only been alive for a minute…that is AWESOME!

…I. AM. SOOOOOOO. FREAKIN’. CONFUSED! Why is my FAVORITE CHARACTER IN THE WHOLE SERIES (ahhem cough Luxord) crying over the sunset? Is Sora and Kairi too late? Has Ariel died yet? WHAT IS GOING ON THAT I HAVE MISSED? It must be something to do with the Nobodies dying or something, but I don’t see why or how…OH THE EPICNESS THAT I AM MISSING! (cries a little on the inside)

Ah…and bonding scene with Sora and them finally at the Door of Light… … … ….wait…who is that voice? Namine? Or ….Roxas…and…matte. Chotto matte. Waitwaitwait…what? WHAT?

“all that is Fake”…the Nobodies…..oh gods…no…..No….NO! Why…Luxord knew…didn’t he?...oh gods…..they…they are going to be destroyed because they are…fake…aren’t they? (I can tell this is good because even after reading the CONTINUATION SERIES after this Story Part it is still getting to me, hehehe)

OOOOOOHHHHH. That makes sense now, who all of those random people were in the Third Part when Sora got to Earth. That makes sense. And…that also means that the Nobodies aren’t fakes anymore, since they probably grew their own hearts. Cool. All of this totally makes sense now. Wicked awesome, yo.

? was that….Humor I spied coming from the Organization? As in…they are attempting to Leave Axel behind…nah, it had to be serious…but then, if it had been serious, why does Axel get to stay behind? No fair…I think it was Humor…but I’m not sure! Well, I’ll find out in a moment or two…

I was waiting for a Narnia reference (with the four thrones at Cape Paravel or whatever its called), so I’m glad for that little thing there, Sora. “Hey, don’t kick me, I just came back from the dead!” I don’t think this is a good, justified argument. I think Roxas can kick him all he wants. Hahaha!

Oh gods…Xemnas is crying…I…I don’t understand (It’s been too long)…why are they…they can’t just…fade? They can’t…I mean…oh gods…they are all…really…leaving…..

…one thing before I finish looking down the list(ahhem. The ORDERED list) of the departing Nobodies. WHERE. . !...back to serious chiz now…

Oh…DEMY! And everyone…everybody…minna….THAT IS NOT FAIR! Why…naze ishten no ka? Why can’t Axel go too…they have to separate best friends…its…its not fair! Its cheating…(sob)…is what it is…(cry)…cheating…beeps…(cry)…

That…was…

…AMAZING! I can’t believe it, you got me to get so emotional (not to mention confused, but I am always like that) over something I ALREADY KNEW THE CONTINUATION/ENDING TO. Wow. Very, Very impressive.
Sora Tayuya chapter 39 . 11/17/2010
Wow…all the emotion…Victoria taking Sora’s place to die…Sora officially being the Prince of Light (which obviously makes Roxas the Prince of Darkness)…Namine Erasing herself and being the Princess of Darkness…Namine’s confession just too late…Vexen’s breakdown between himself and Crive…oh man, oh wow…

Wow…Vexen…so that is what happened…wow…how…horrible…and so very, very…sad…
Sora Tayuya chapter 38 . 11/17/2010
Again. More epicness.

But...the last sentance confuses me, and I think was kinda random. She just...died? Was that part of the plan...huh, but, oh well. The serious-ness is still cool.
Sora Tayuya chapter 37 . 11/17/2010
Aww…I see now where that surprise ending for Demy came in at the third part in the series. You are a Demy fan, but of course after saying that, who isn’t? Hehehe…

Dang, so much awesome in so little time...haha, I can hardly keep up!
Sora Tayuya chapter 36 . 11/17/2010
Even more epicness, and I now know even MORE why Vexen's wife is like that in the third part. Still...I don't totally understand the point of kidnapping the Nobodies...but oh well, it was AWESOME!
Sora Tayuya chapter 35 . 11/17/2010
I don't think there is much to say in this chapter...too...much...emotion...other than the brief reference at totally underage marriage practices (not counting the legal marrying age in other countries), or the quick ceremony totally like Pirates of the Caribbean 3...well, it was pretty...serious...Sora...
Sora Tayuya chapter 34 . 11/17/2010
And the epicness continues. Also, as I read this chapter, I have, mind you, been listening to “The Dragon Boy” on YouTube. Gotta love SpiritedAway. It really helped that the perfect music came right as Gai mistook Roxas for Lee. I can understand that. It was probably one of the few times in this story that you have had a dramatic silence/pause and not have something funny happen. It was very serious, and touching. I really liked it.

Aw…that…was very…sad. (yes, I am having a ‘moment’ here. Be patient) So…Orpheus is just a machine, a cyborg now, once human…that is really sad.

Oh Axel, way to break up a very traumatic and sad final reunion. Although, I must say he is the perfect person to restore a sense of normality to this situation. However…it would be like 3 times better yet if right after this great thing with Axel…then the final people could get captured and whatnot…but I bet it won’t happen…darn.

This scene with the collapsing castle is amazing. Very theatrical. I particularly liked it because I re-started “The Dragon Boy” song…hehehe…

Oops, my bad. Vexen is the COUSIN, not brother. Makes more sense, I suppose. That probably means that Sulhadahne is like a clone of Victoria…how sad…ah! Sorta a clone, but creepy, because his wife saw her before she died…oh my…

I like Aisu’s power, by the way. Nice.

Oh Sora…and what an epic chapter. Nice background music too, haha.
Sora Tayuya chapter 33 . 11/17/2010
This chapter was so FREAKIN' EPIC. I don't know how I am still alive.

Oh duh, so that I can see the FREAKIN' AWESOME ending! Yay!
Sora Tayuya chapter 32 . 11/17/2010
Wow…that was…a beautiful scene. I must say I am supremely impressed in this scene with Kairi and Selphie. It was tremendously done. The beginning, and what happened. Wow.

Then…with Namine…I’m worried…so worried…for them all…
Sora Tayuya chapter 31 . 11/17/2010
Oh. My. Gods. Hojo seriously thought that Sora…was Cloud? What a killer, dramatic moment. Just like that moment in the “Lion King” when Scar mistakes Simba for Mufasa.

Scary…so…I’m guessing Sulhadahne is speaking to Sora’s mind like an innocent child asking to be recognized when they do something, right? Well…this is bad. Only because 1) her dad is psychotic and 2) because I can see a clear future where she is going to do something really, really bad because she is confused.

Ooooh…Zexion is fighting Orpheus…that is bad. That means…Zexion now knows…well…sucks for him. Still, I give Demyx kudos for trying to lighten up such a damper scene. Still…I am worried for them. All of them…

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! (screams very loudly for a long period of time, then collapses due to awesome, horrifying, yet astoundingly terrifying scene of the Organization trapped.) Oh gods (x one million)…only Zexion, Saix, Demyx, and Roxas are missing…not counting the one that is possibly for Namine…oh gods…oh gods…oh gods…(I am horror stricken at this moment, if you cannot tell.) This is one of the few, beautiful, but rare, moments in your fiction that I really, really feel is spectacular in terms of OH MY GODS….but still. I wonder why Crives needs ALL of them…I mean, shouldn’t the ones already gathered be plenty of power? I mean…if you are thinking of each of them being unique and totally necessary to this then yes…but still…oh gods Demyx…and Zexy…even Saix…and of course Roxas…

Favorite. Chapter. YET.
Sora Tayuya chapter 30 . 11/17/2010
I love this chapter for its serious nature. I love this chapter for its humor. I love this chapter for the insights it gives into Sulhadahne's past, and creation.

I do not love this chapter, in the theatrical sense in my mind, for I gravely worry for Saix and the other Nobodies. What is going on, where are they? Are they alright...what's happening?

Demyx...Xiggy...Saix...Luxord...Xemnas...Xaldin...Vexen...Zexion...Larxene...Lexaeus...Marluxia...Axel...
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