|Reviews for Your eyes|
| LOCISVU chapter 4 . 12/31/2007
Well,payback's a bitch!
| xfreelifex chapter 4 . 6/4/2007
Oh shit is right. Except, that shit in your sense means some elaborate French, and shit in my sense means...well, frankly, it describes your story.
In a word, it's terrible; in several, it can't hold my attention for more than a minute. I only made it to the fourth chapter by scanning through the dialogue (of which you have entirely too much of), leaping through your plot holes, looking for a SHRED of plot. I'm saddened to say I couldn't find any.
Have a nice day )
| Nurse Firecracker chapter 2 . 6/4/2007
See, this is what irks me about the school system. If you're really a Junior and you can't properly construct a sentence, use the appropriate punctuation, and spell, I'm saddened. This is precisely why people get to college and suddenly realize they're completely screwed - for your own sake, please invest some time in learning the basics of form, function, grammar, and spelling. It will seriously be beneficial in the longrun.
| JackieNYRangers chapter 4 . 5/31/2007
Liv is a complete Bitch!
And I must say that Alex is not very far behind...
THEY JUST IGNORED CASEY...
I hope Liv dies ALONE now!Muahahahahahahahaha
Sorry, that was a lil bit extreme,right?
But anyway, nice FF, kinda confused me, because in the beggining Casey is all in love and all, than she's crying, and then there's Alex...but anyway, keep doing it!
| JackieNYRangers chapter 3 . 5/31/2007
What the hell is wrong with this woman? (AKA Olivia)
Who the hell she loves?
I hope it's Casey
| JackieNYRangers chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
I can't believ it's Liv...
And, " I'm just another ADA"?
Dude, tha's sad...
Don't cry Casey!
| JackieNYRangers chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
Short, but totally cute!
Who is it?
No doubt I'm reading the next chap!
| dawnjp1987 chapter 3 . 12/7/2006
Olivia seriously needs to make up her mind already.
| snowxpatrol chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
that seems like its going to be a good story. aw...thats sweet...lol great job! update soon!
| Atashi Desu chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
just get to the god stuffs already, foo! hehe. Yeah, I can't judge yet, seeing as how you DIDN'T PUT ENOUGH! DEPRIVING! DEPRIVING! hehe :D