Reviews for The past haunts the present
suchrandomness chapter 2 . 10/16/2009
I thought Ziva could get out of handcuffs in less than a minute - faster if it's her own pair. That's what Mossad teaches you
Jael73 chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Without spacing, this is almost impossible to read...
aithreachas chapter 2 . 2/25/2007
The way you write and the pacing of your story more than make up for the grammar errors. The fact that you write this well when English is obviously a second language for you is to be admired. You are a good storyteller and though the ending on this one may have been a bit abrupt your overall tale was extremely satisfying. Thank you very much.
Aeris chapter 2 . 10/20/2006
This was a really fantastic story. Perhaps there can be a sequel or something ;)

I so love the Tony/Gibbs interaction.

Aeris
shirik chapter 2 . 10/5/2006
why did you end it so fast? i really enjoyed it! i hope you'll add more like this soon!
Jedi Padfoot chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
COOL! This story is pretty good. I would like to see more of it.
ufogoth chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Great Job! Tis so exciting! Can't wait to read more... so... update soon, please!
ladc chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Looks great so far. Love Tony taking lead.
PeoplePerson chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
I like it! ( Adds to Story Alert list.) Please don't kill Tony!
bethellie chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
The formatting makes reading a little tricky, you need some spaces...but otherwise I like it.
shirik chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
wow what a start! i love it if tony will be hurt- not to kill him just so everyone will worry about him... so gibbs will rescue everybody?

please update soon. tnx!