|Reviews for Return to Lyoko|
| Lord Mephisto chapter 5 . 8/21/2010
That was pretty good for being such a short chapter.
I look forward to reading the rest of the story.
| Andrew chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
As far as Peter Duncan's revenge is concerned, the worst crime he ever committed of his own free will was grand theft auto. Of course commendeering a rod of uranium is a much more serious offense, but he was possessed when that happened.
| Crysal1010 chapter 2 . 1/6/2007
More... give me MORE!... what's in the room? good story too
| Xaantiaz chapter 2 . 10/31/2006
A very good story so far, I hope it lives up to your last one. The change in formating makes this story much easier to read (20 word paragraphs were hard on the eyes). However, when you jump from one place (i.e. Lyoko) to another (i.e. the real world) you might want to add some sort of break or the jump on its own line to make it easier to follow.
Other than formating, it is looking good. Lots of suggesting to past events makes it a litle confusing, but if you explain them, it should make everything clear.
| Lord Mephisto chapter 2 . 10/28/2006
great story. that all i can say, great. look forward to seeing chap. 3