|Reviews for Lips of an Angel|
| jojowriter85 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
OMG! This made me cry. Short and simple, but i'm crying. And i love this song, glad it was on my ipod so i could listen to it while i read this. Made it even better. Would make an awesome story.
| LadyReview chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Interesting plot even if the division of the lyrics are a tad distracting (it might be better if you wait to divy it up between what would be pauses in the lyics if read while listening to the music)
You've left a lot unsaid about the story here - ever consider turning this into a longer fiction?
PS - I reviewed Please Come Back Home in my forum ( I don't post songfics there when they follow really close to the lyics - and they're usually too short)
| KellyRoxton chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
Wow. Such a good fic. Marie and Logan I love this characters together just as much as I love Gibbs and Abby. You have a GREAT talent. Please write more soon. Hugs you.
| Rhapsodist chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
I saw this band live. I loved them but everyone around was just like "WTF?" Anyway, cool story. Kinda sad but pretty good. I have to say I don't like the idea of Logan abandoning Marie, but hey, not my story.
| X-Man chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Where do I start? How about with, "I'm sorry, but I don't much like this." Yeah, that'll do.
Let me focus first on the dialogue of the call. It's repetative... too repetative. Except for a few lines they keep repeating themselves... and each other. As gut-wrenching as this could have been, there's just no depth to it.
The second thing that bothers me is that they're both in other relationships and still having this conversation. If they miss each other THAT much and need each other THAT much, I think they'd have figured it out by this point. And on top of that, if they HADN'T figured it out by this point and are realizing it now, would they really stay in their current relationships? What are they, married? If so, you should've made that clear... and they should damn well have the common sense and restraint to leave each other alone.
Finally, the song annoys me. It annoys me for the same reasons I've listed above. The guy's in a relationship; the girl's in a relationship. They're talking to one another behind the backs of the people they claim to love. It's just an uncomfortable situation... one that I hope any logical human being would be able to avoid.
Another thing that annoys me about the song: at the start, it sounds so sweet, like a love song... which, if you think about it, it IS a love song. But then, the further you get into it, the more twisted the love song becomes. Why the hell would you stay in a relationship when you so clearly love another?
GAA! I can't stand it!
By the way, I've included my email address in this review. If you care to defend your work in any way at all, even if you intend to call me a senseless idiot who can't see the love in a love song, go ahead.
I don't care. My opinion is what it is and will not change... and I'm solid enough in myself to take a little beating if that's what you feel you ought to do.
| Gwenfrewi72 chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
That was rip your heart out beautiful. My chest hurts so much it was that amazing.
I don't have a heart condition, just really good fics always make my chest hurt and that's the best compliment I can give you.
| bee chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
that. is. beautiful.