Reviews for Law & Order
icutkey chapter 9 . 7/14/2015
No continuation?too bad cause its really good
ChakraChains chapter 9 . 6/27/2015
I really love how you describe things with your writing! And, uh... are you leaving this? It's really good and it would be a shame if you left it ?
BettyeK chapter 9 . 4/23/2014
Hey... Howdy There Ruby Plushie!

I just wanted to take a minute and say, hi and that your story is an excellent idea, but it seems to be missing a whole lot of something at the moment. *bows* And, of course, I mean the ending. I was wondering if you have abandoned the story as it's been a really long time since it's been updated. I hope not, but real life does happen, and stories get pushed to the wayside.

It's a very good premise and I would like to see you finish it, but if you are done, thank you for sharing your idea with us here. The investigation hasn't really even begun... besides finding the murder weapon and Shino's autopsy report. What else could there be? Oh, wait! Abumi's mom is Orochimaru in disguise... right? No... that's not right, she would have mentioned that Abumi said he was going to be hanging out with "that Uzumaki kid" to get him in to even more trouble. Ah well, I can so see Orochimaru as a cross-dressing suspect. Anyway, I hope we hear more on the story.

BettyeK
cary99 chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Loved it
ALittlePartyNeverKilledNobody chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
"Jesus may walk on water, but Chuck Norris can walk on Jesus." - love it!

And I'm really looking forward to the other chapters - really nice story (go SasuNaru!)
TheQueenAt17 chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
Yay Death Note! I'm in the mood for cake now... thanks a lot, L!
I'm loving your story so far XD

YaoiQueen17 xxx
kasia110 chapter 9 . 6/24/2012
300th reviewer! My second time reading this! 3
cb chapter 9 . 3/18/2012
sweet
StoriesILike chapter 5 . 3/7/2012
You're doing this on purpose, aren't you! xD Seriously, I feel my dislike for Sai rising with every word and it just keeps on building up! I'm almost tempted to say that I hate him, a little...or at least, that selfish little brattish part of him!

It's clear he's never loved before, but damn that's a little too far for revenge...I wonder if the media will play a part in all this (surely ppl can see how selfish Sai is? I'm hoping here, but I bet you'll have the angst kick in soon enough D':)

Ok well, I'll be reading the rest now
ocdanime chapter 9 . 11/2/2011
Omg amazing story I hope you will finish it but it seems that it has not been updated since '08 please fanfiction gods get this message to the missing author
JoanIncarnate chapter 9 . 5/30/2011
ummm is the story finished here?
JoanIncarnate chapter 5 . 5/30/2011
oh em geez! itachi and sasuke are so adorable here! i wish they were more like this in the manga.
DarkAngel0425 chapter 9 . 5/9/2011
why in the HELL havent you finished it yet!

0.o A
DarkAngel0425 chapter 8 . 5/8/2011
the second shino said he drowned, without thinking about it, i blurted 'someone tried to save him!' in slightly horrified and also slightly terrified gasp.

Horrified cause someone else was there... and

Terrified cause im really really reeaallyyy hoping it wasnt naruto like i suspect it mightve been.

P.S. now gimme meh cookie! X3
Mysterylegend chapter 9 . 2/20/2011
Just finished reading chapter nine and I'm really liking your story. I really hope that you come back to writing it. It's a great story and I like the writing. I really want to see what happens next.

~Mys
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