Reviews for Tempered in Water |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The way you make Naruto grow then suddenly regress his growth is really impressive. what happened to guy with the good chakra control in the early chapters and a more matured attitude? |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty epic story honestly love the depth of it. best of luck, |
![]() ![]() ![]() naruto is not pathetic. the village rhat abused him is pathetic. the homage who failed to properly protect him is pathetic. the academy that sabotaged their villages jinchuriki is pathetic. having an Anbu Captain as a jonin left to train you and didn't is pathetic. NOT NARUTO |
![]() ![]() Any ine who writes harems,incest or pedo shit is automatically trash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto's canon personality really pisses me off, his hypocrisy his grandpa hokage is a baby killer and I don't see him complaining about it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp, your A/N literally killed any qnd all motivation to keep reading... |
![]() ![]() Damn, the author’s fragile heterosexuality shows its face |
![]() ![]() ![]() You leave Haku alone you random Asshole! |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitely an enjoyable story! |
![]() ![]() Sakura was not even comparable to Naruto at this point in time... Please die. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Imagine being so brain dead you couldn't even finish this story. Fuck you. |
![]() ![]() Fuck! Give me more! |
![]() ![]() Great chapter; I knew Haku was teetering on the edge and knew it would be a problem. Had Naruto been wiser, he would have requested multiple D-ranks for himself instead. Or perhaps dealing with this now is better. |
![]() ![]() This is good shit; the quality of writing, characterization and depth of thought is top-notch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty nice story ngl |