Reviews for Tempered in Water
End.User chapter 9 . 5/1
Good writing but I'm disappointed that you didn't break from cannon and still had Kakashi enter them to the chunin exam when he definitely had more reason not to do so this time around.
Oniele chapter 1 . 4/24
Hello slave!, continue writing or die by chihuahua army attack!
talking seriously, why id you ever stop? it's so good, care to give a reason? you don't have to of course
Mr.Evil Tree chapter 4 . 4/6
well done
shin chapter 9 . 1/20
This fic is beautiful. High quality writing. The strong characterization really draws you in, and one can vividly see the inner turmoil of the characters and the dynamic changes in their relationships that result from it. Great concept, Great execution. I really enjoyed seeing Naruto face the existential dilemma of being a ninja, and the moral conflict that it poses. It felt so REAL. This fic is truly a shining gem a cut above the rest. I couldn't stop reading it when I started, because it was just so damn good. At the end, at 4 in the morning, I couldn't help but stay awake and praise the author for writing such a good fanfic. I hope and pray you continue this someday. I've read many fics with good concepts, but most of them are severely lacking in either variation, or good writing skill. With this fic, its obviously well edited and thought out. Either that you're a writing genius. Thanks, again.
TheFunnyMonkey chapter 9 . 12/7/2014
MORE DANG IT! MORE! PLEASE! AFTER ALL THESE YEARS! PLEASE! CONTINUE IT! I LOVE IT! I WANT MOAR! I WANNA KNOW WHAT NARUTO DID TO SASGAY! PLEASE!
Darkness and Snow chapter 9 . 12/3/2014
One of the best fics I have read. Too bad it appears to be abandoned
Winter's Folly chapter 6 . 9/7/2014
Lovely.
Winter's Folly chapter 3 . 9/6/2014
Wonderful.
Winter's Folly chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
This sounds interesting.
MayumiRose chapter 9 . 8/18/2014
So far, this is a very well-done and interesting story.

I am sad to see that it hasn't been updated in quite a long time, though I do hope you update it eventually!
HitomiFeito chapter 9 . 8/18/2014
I feel like things for Naruto just keep getting worse and that Kakashi is utterly clueless on how to build teamwork and is instead making things worse for them. I have other more obvious character observations but i still like your store even if it does make me depressed. I really do like it a lot xxx
Axcel chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
Why do they call things like what Gatou and his thugs did human nature when people like that are in the extreme minority amongst humanity? It's like taking ten thousand people and then one of them is a villain and everyone else goes "it's human nature". Really? Pfft, human nature is to be like the other nine hundred ninety nine people, not the one bad egg.
Pyryp chapter 9 . 6/24/2014
Too much time spent with Sakura but the relationship of Haku and Naruto is one of the most realistic I've ever seen in fanfiction. I wish you had continued this instead of starting a new story.
R-dude chapter 9 . 4/16/2014
On a scale of 1 to 10, how abandoned is this?
flamer chapter 7 . 4/14/2014
I'd say fuck you Hiruzen!
You can take Naruto debt from what Minato and Kushina left for him if you want!
And you being lenient?! Dont joke around
What the hell are you do for Naruto?!
Yoy declare his status as Jinchuriki!
If you didnt he wont have any problem!
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