Reviews for Tempered in Water
wildwill chapter 9 . 2/8/2019
Shame to see this was dead, it was really great!
carl9390 chapter 5 . 2/3/2019
I miss this it was the story that really got me into fanfiction it's good to come back to it and it still be great.
HikaruNarukami chapter 9 . 12/12/2018
This is very interesting.
The effects that killing has on the psyche and how you had the characters deal with them was interesting.
I do hope you will have Haku deal with her insecurities eventually, if you update this fic.
Arfah Indo chapter 3 . 12/8/2018
Subarashi.. Sohih!
Mr.SoujiSeta chapter 9 . 10/29/2018
I've been reading this story since forever! Thanks for uploading this and hope you keep writing. Please don't give up!
Yitzi chapter 8 . 6/30/2018
Leaving us with a dead story on a cliffhanger like that is some serious bullshit dude. Please address or hend it up for adoption. Good stories don't deserve to die like this.
Chue19 chapter 5 . 5/18/2018
Why doesnr the hokage gove him some of the money that belongs to kushina uzumaki and say it belongs to naruto since hes the last uzumaki just like saskue is given money from his clans money sice his the last uchiha
Kingkong101 chapter 9 . 1/5/2018
So naruto is a little bitch boy
FadilShameer chapter 9 . 1/3/2018
i loved it
usually when authors draw out the scenes too long it becomes annoying.
but somehow you managed to find a balance.
i can't wait for the nxt update from u.
unless ur dead in which case rest in peace.
Trickster79 chapter 9 . 12/28/2017
I definitely think Naruto should forget Sakura and get interested in Haku. And finally! Sakura has blossomed :D
It was damn time she did, although I felt bad about her meeting with the Suna team. I do hope however she geets to get stronger and plummel Kankuro in the dirt. Sasuke should start going into theraphy, he's right now a liability to the entire team...and Kakashi. I could rant poetics about him and his dynamics in this work but the word that summarizes everything is that he SUCKS. Like, yeah, he's their sensei and he is a jounin and he was the one to teach them to look "underneath the underneath" but he really needs to follow his own advices. The relationship between Sakura and NAruto was toxic at best and plain bulling and abuse at worst, while Sasuke's tunnel vision obviously are leading him towards his future nuke-nin status/traitor. Haku being alive and helping Naruto is the only good thing in this entire fic, although I wonder if her demise won't have been slowed with the omnious ending...really interested in this fic, hope you'll keep surprising me :D
Katt chapter 4 . 11/29/2017
About halfway through this chapter, and already I find this story so annoyingly disgusting. Is there ever a fucking Naruto that would hit this pink bitch back?
shiki777 chapter 1 . 11/5/2017
im pretty sure anybody can adopt this has been dead for more than a few years
Stxhac chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
Oh course. I fall in love with a story that has not been updated in 8 years. Is this story adoptable?
LordShadow01515 chapter 7 . 10/13/2017
Finally! Someone with a better elemental training method than "wet this leaf!" or "crumble this leaf!". The characters have realistic emotions. Most stories i read where Zabuza dies and Haku lives have Haku going on" like " oh no he's dead. Let's move on and completely forget our ideology, our beliefs over the next ten minnutes". The only problem i have with this story is that it has been abandoned.
joshuatrim chapter 9 . 10/5/2017
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