|Reviews for the fresh prince of belair mystery|
| jrv123 chapter 4 . 1/3/2012
Enjoyed the first 3 chapters but couldn't follow it as it got to the 4 I thought it was very unrealistic that phil and will would wait for 6 minutes on the phone
| nancy drew nickerson chapter 7 . 6/28/2007
You're doing pretty good so far. I like the idea of the story. There's just a few things that you might want to work on. Length is one of them. Maybe you could make your chapters a little bit longer instead of one paragraph chapters? Just a suggestion. Another is spelling/grammer. You've misspelled many words in your story and/or used the incorrect form of the word. You should really try to look over your chapters before posting them. Spelling errors can take away from the main idea of the story because readers will just focus on the spelling errors, not the story in general. And it is in the rules, too.
I'm sorry, I don't mean this to be a flame review, I just wanted to mention those two things. I do like your story so far, and I hope you add more on soon...I hope Will is alright :)
-nancy drew nickerson
| SmellyThePirate chapter 7 . 4/3/2007
Spell Check. Use it. Im sorry, but you really need it :l
| A.Interrobang chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
Its ok, just remember on FanFiction you have to spell things right.
| XxSpecklesIsMyBabyxX chapter 7 . 12/15/2006
BAE! wats gona happen. u havnt updated in 4 eva.
| ChrisDaywalker chapter 3 . 11/9/2006
ok I dont know why you named the girl Hilary cause thats Will's
cousins name unless if thats really her. But I dont remember an
episode where they met at a movie you have to show me so idk.
| KHQueeninLolita chapter 7 . 10/6/2006
Cool story! Can't wait for the sequel.