|Reviews for Mr Brightside Oneshot|
| DragonMistressOfRedemption888 chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
Everything was wonderful, except the end. Yugi should have run back to Rebecca for comfort, begging for her forgiveness. That's how I would've ended it, anyway.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Your so called pun was really not a pun. I doubt Kaiba would just jump Tea like that and oh then they fall in love, yeah cuz thats what happens.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Seriously? That was gross! I just puked
| OnlySlightlySane chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Well, the story was very well written but the ending was overly drastic. I know this is a fan fic and you can write whatever the heck you want but, maybe its because when i was a teenager i ALMOST commited suicide myself, the part where Yu-Gi shoots himself really struck a nerve and Im sure others who have read this, it struck a nerve for them too even if they havent tried to kill them selvs. Or maybe you should have just barely mentioned the suicide part, say somthing like, "And the next morning Tea finds Yu Gi, still holding the gun to his heart." it gives the reader a less graphic ending image, ya know? Or have him kill himself with sleeping pills, but this is just what i think, some people out there might be happier than a fat kid in a candy store that you killed Yu Gi.
| Jessica Watsuki chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
haha nice pun. I LOVED THIS STORY! Poor Yugi. U actually made me feel bad for him which i usually don't. But oh well Tea and Seto are the best couple ever! Loved the song with the story, fit very well! A very good read :)
| X-you-think-you-know-me-X chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
this was an awsome story with an awsome song
it was really good
| Karigan250 chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
*stands up and gives thunderous applause* Well done babe, well done!
| SetoKaibaLover111 chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Very good. I liked it a lot. It was a tad bit confuesing at first cause of all the point of view changes, but I soon caught on to it and the story became very interesting. Yeah I caught the pun and I think it's funny too. Good job on the writing.
-adds story to faves-
| Stephaniexyz chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Nice story, Its really hard finding a good Anzu/Seto fanfic for me and considering I ahte Yugi (Not Yami) This was perfect Awsome job
| Cosmic Fool chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Aw, that was awesome. I don't really like Tea/Yugi, so I was happy when she got with Seto. Great sex scene too, not pornographic but makes your breathe hitch. Good work!
| SaiyanWarrior200 chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
now I know where we get oneshots from! Shocking that Yugi killed himself but then again he did break her heart.
| rio chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
he gos to drastic measures!i mean yugi goes to drastic measures!
| ImotoHiNeko chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
'One shot' I got that. Good story.
| Noobs of Steel chapter 1 . 10/6/2006