|Reviews for Death of A Demon, Birth of A|
| Wolfone10 chapter 3 . 5/8/2014
Territory chakra? Hmm someone has watched Yu Yu Hakisho
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/15/2014
His name was Hiruzen Sarutobi his father was sasuke sarutobi
| ShadowFireZelda chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
Sarutobi's first name is Hiruzen, but his father's name was actually Sasuke in canon.
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
Did you know that there is something called 'self fulfilling prophecy' if one is called 'Demon' countless times they will change their self-image into that of a demon. Thus Naruto's personalities in cannon make no sense from a sociologist nor a psychologist point of view. It is so entirely out of reality that Naruto's personality could be described as 'artificial' in concordance to the environmental variables.
To surmise Naruto should be dark and evil not happy-go-lucky, naive, trusting, hyperactive boy with raman addiction.
| puma1sunfire chapter 19 . 1/26/2012
Great story! Looking forward to more and seeing what else you have written
| DreigoththeVampireGod chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
| 21Orphans chapter 4 . 11/2/2011
you know i actually feel sorry for naruto he had to get the most absolute worst team possible a pink haired banshee that would sooner shatter your ear drums then say something nice and a brooding emo king who needs to get out hes probably gay to considering he had all those girls fawning over him and he just concentrated on itachi and naruto
| SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth chapter 10 . 2/16/2011
I hope you have Sakura viciously beaten at some point in this. Rape optional. She's a cunt.
| Githren chapter 8 . 1/4/2011
I love what your doing here, for a whilr i haf thought naruto had already reached his bankai. My k owledge on bleach os unfortunetly lacking. Your a very good writer the only problrem i can see off the top off my head is how you too use the overplayed " angst/ emo" trait for sasuke or people who overtone black, for that i am dissapoint
| kihakukage chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
| AReader47 chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
Awesome story I think Naruto needs a LOT of character development in this one
| Goldrune09 chapter 6 . 8/29/2010
| Fuyutaro son chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
i read, i'm reviewing, but i'm moving onto the next chapter instead of repeating.
| SisterSafetyPin chapter 11 . 8/21/2010
You don't explain yourself well at all. As someone who's never seen Bleach this story is just... frustrating. I mean, last I checked this was a Naruto story but I don't understand anything going on. I can't visualize anything in this story because you assume everyone has seen bleach. The characters are OOC without provocation. It's just... not well done at all
| MachikoTakara chapter 20 . 8/15/2010
i just wanted to point out that for those people who havent read or watched bleach before, this story would be highly confusing as you dont explain the concepts that have been transfered from bleach to naruto.
that said, you dont want to simply describe the bleach storyline and so i find that as an author you are probably strugling to define your adapted concepts without explaining the original as a comparison.
I do believe you are doing a pretty good job of it so far though, i know i wouldnt be able to do a piece as complicated as this, so congrats and keep up the good work