Reviews for Betrayed
whatnameshallitake chapter 30 . 3/13
GOSH!Best ItaSaku story I've read so far
Yotequiero chapter 30 . 1/17
I loved it it was amazingly written huge props with all my heart refinery one of the best stories on here
Guest chapter 6 . 6/20/2014
Being a very critical reader, by now I can tell how much of a weeaboo you are. You rushed things instead of taking a steady timing with descriptive writing, you use japanese words to replace english often, you exaggerate a tad too much but other than that, great grammar and spelling skill :) I feel like you could have done a lot better, take your time to write (not like moi of course) no one's rushing you but since it's completed, maybe come back and rewrite things? This can be applied to every fanfic you'll ever write so good luck!
kiko280 chapter 30 . 11/19/2013
Aww kinda sad in. This chap
kiko280 chapter 27 . 11/18/2013
Lol I wonder how mad Sakura is gonna b when she arrives at the base!
I wonder if hinata is going to faint cos she can't believe it actually happened!
kiko280 chapter 23 . 11/18/2013
I think Sakura took sachi his blow
kiko280 chapter 10 . 11/18/2013
Lol walking into the tree twice!
kiko280 chapter 4 . 11/17/2013
Lol deidara!
BoomPowMina chapter 30 . 7/18/2013
I cried like a baby... their deaths were so sad... stung by a bee... DDD': What also got me was the words of the dead...dammit my teddy bear is soaked with my tears (love ya Wally)
The story was AMAZING! It lacked description of places, but other than that, i LOVED IT!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING IT, AND STAY AWESOME! :D
BoomPowMina chapter 29 . 7/18/2013
SASUKEEEEE YOU MADE ME CRY AGAIN! WHEN HE SAID THAT HE LOVES HER, I COMPLETLY BROKE DOWN CRYING! DAMMIT BASTARD, GET YOUR ICE CUBE ASS BACK TO KONOHA!
BoomPowMina chapter 28 . 7/18/2013
OH SASUKE, I MISS YOU, YOU ICE CUBE, EMO PRINCE, YOU! You were so mean to her and you broke my heart in the letter...But you are still missed :') Oh how i wish for him to come back to Konoha in the series, since he is dead (WAAAAAAH) here...
BoomPowMina chapter 27 . 7/18/2013
Sasuke... :(
XD giand blob of doom...
BoomPowMina chapter 26 . 7/18/2013
That was REALLY fun to read...Jesus Christ, i think that every girl, deffinetly me, would do ANYTHING to dance with 2 EXTREMLY hot guys such as Itachi and Hidan...
BoomPowMina chapter 25 . 7/18/2013
I almost had a heartattack...SHE almost KISSED HIM! GOD DAMMIT DEIDARA, YOU MADE OUT WITH HER! I know i said that i want Taiyou to leave, but i changed my mind...STAY! XD Sachi saw them...BUSTED
BoomPowMina chapter 24 . 7/18/2013
I HATE MARRY SUE'S THEY IRRITATE THE HELL OUT OF ME!
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