|Reviews for Vox Corporis|
| maesde chapter 68 . 3/6
All time favourite. Loved the romance, the growth of their relatioship; it was beautifuly done. Great job, from begining to end.
| guest chapter 68 . 3/4
Great :-( now I can't stop crying. This fic is just too awesome for words. It is definitely one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece of work. I spent half the time crying and the other half awwing with how cute some moments were. You have a true gift for writing, I really enjoyed this fic and I hope you will give publishing your work a bit more thought because if what you usually write is of the same quality, you have a fair chance of being published.
| FireRebel chapter 68 . 3/2
*sigh* what a wonderful story. I've read it twice now I think. Just wonderful. I literally cannot express how amazing it is within one review. Truly impeccable I love the anamigus. The whole thing was just amazing. I love the story so much. So much character and humor as well as amazing ness. From the very first chapter to the last I was entriged. So much detail and so much. Definitely one of my favorites.
| avidReader chapter 1 . 2/25
You're writing is brilliant. Among the best I've seen most anywhere on the internet and more than a few published writers.
| PaultheEwok chapter 68 . 2/24
Awesome. Great story I really enjoyed it. I do really enjoy action and adventure but I do have a bit of a guilty pleasure for a good love story. Which I think this is more so than other HP fan fics I've read but I did enjoy the action in it as well.
One of the things I found in this story especially towards the start was how much I miss Hedwig. I'm probably in the minority but I miss Hedwig more than Dobby. She was his familiar and had been with him since he found out he was a wizard and I liked how that stood out in this fic the bond between them.
I don't really care about Ron, I mean I don't particularly like him but I don't hate him either. I just don't like Ron and Hermione together. I only started reading Harry Potter fan fics this year so I don't really have a preference to who Harry's with as long as its written well. But I have found I don't like RonxHermione, they just don't seem like they would make a very good couple and Ron can be a bit of a git.
Also I was thinking about Dudley dying and I'm not sure how the protection Harry had worked when he was at the Dursleys, is it the fidelity a charm or something similar? Anyway I don't know if its correct but I think it only works when Harry's their so really it's the Dursleys own fault for forcing Harry out of their house and abusing him.
I thought the final battle was brilliant and I like no mercy Harry, well Knight. And also I really liked the ending and the painting was a nice touch much better than a statue. And Harry finally got laid after being interrupted how many times. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Awesome.
Oh and Yay Malfoys Dead!
| Blue Jeans chapter 20 . 2/23
I really like how this story starts of slow and pulls me in. Immensely engaging. Like any good read, it takes its time and make me savor every moment. Glad I don't have to wait for everything though. Fantastic read so far! :D
| mpt.72 chapter 68 . 2/21
Excellent story, completely off canon, which is good. Why repeat JKR verboten.
Your style of writing with deep character analysis and emotional involvement is a breath of fresh air to the vast majority of what I have read on FF.
Good luck with your own tale, if you put half the resolve into that as you have obviously into this, then you should have a good start as an author.
| missgsmith51 chapter 68 . 2/19
Excellent! I really enjoyed your story, although I did destroy a few Kleenexes in the last few chapters. That's a compliment, btw, because it means I became totally immersed in your story.
The Harry-Hermione pairing is always my favorite, and I like that your story was more character than plot driven. You took time to develop not only the relationship but also the individual characters, which made them more interesting and real. It was also a nice change that the Weasleys weren't too horrible and Dumbledore was a bit more like a Headmaster and less like an obsessed manipulator ... although greedy, manipulative Weasleys and Dumbledore really can be fun, too, when done well.
Anyway, you did a great job!
| missgsmith51 chapter 65 . 2/19
Where are Hermione's parents? I can't believe it has been so long and they still aren't at St. Mungo's. Doesn't McGonagall believe in contacting the parents when their child lies near death?
| missgsmith51 chapter 64 . 2/19
Oh, my goodness! This chapter was a tear-jerker. I hate that Aberforth and poor Sirius had to die. But what of Kimmy? Did they hurt her, too? I hope not.
| missgsmith51 chapter 63 . 2/19
Poor Harry! If something happens to Hermione, will he be "stuck" in his animagus form? I wonder what McGonagall is thinking about now, with these two unregistered animagi? Wait till she finds out how quickly they were able to achieve the transformations. She'll probably have THEM teaching it at Hogwarts!
Speaking of animagi, what's going on with Sirius? Has he been found yet? And what about Aberforth?
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| missgsmith51 chapter 57 . 2/19
Harry needs to learn to control his "inner beast" - or, as Kimmy would say, he needs to stop "cat thinking."
| missgsmith51 chapter 56 . 2/19
Uh-oh. Now Draco knows. I wonder if Dumbledore will obliviate the knowledge from him.
| missgsmith51 chapter 53 . 2/19
Wait a minute! I just realized Berti and everyone left with the turkey I the oven! I hope someone goes back and takes care of things.
"... 'quiet' and 'Weasley' had never been concepts on friendly terms." LOL That is certainly the truth.
Hmm. I wouldn't have thought Hermione would cave like that and tell Ginny everything, especially about the night of the third task. I can't help it ... I just think both Ron and Ginny tend to be indiscreet when upset, and entrusting them with such sensitive info seems unwise to me.