Reviews for New Lives
Guest chapter 29 . 11/1/2014
Oh come on this should have happened

Ranko comes home to find Nodoka says "Excuse Me" grabs Akane throws her onto her shoulder " I need to talk to my cousin(or if she knows "my fiancée") & drags her upstairs into her room slams her against the wall

"Look it you little B!#, I want to the Nekohatten go business & thanks to the little slut we lost today. I don't need you & your little jealous routine because I had to do something involving one of the fiancées, not only is our world on the line but so are four others so GROW UP" she slams her again into the wall this time letting her drop to the floor"
maryjane5000 chapter 29 . 11/1/2014
Sorry I forgot one question

I know you hint that it's after Crystal Tokyo & because of the characters it's during Pokemon Advanced but where is it in the time lines for Ranma, Naruto & Zatch Bell?
maryjane5000 chapter 28 . 10/31/2014
I love this twist on the crossover senshi fic I think it's the only one that takes place after Crystal Tokyo & not the Silver Millennium, so far while a little short at times it's nicely done. How ever I do have a few questions for you

1) Is it really Minako that's in Naruto's head or is it a (as often used in crossover senshi fics) recording/imprinted memory?

2) You stated that Minako is in Naruto because of Kyubi who is a fox demon & that in about 95% of fics involving the Nekoken they state that it is a demon possession gone wrong, so why isn't there a Makoto is Ranma's head?

3) Why hasn't Pluto, the cats or Neo Queen Serinity (Usagi not Usa) tried curing the Nekoken?

4) Is Ranma's curse form altered now & if not why? I mean you could keep the Makoto's hair & Ranko's body, Makoto body & have Ranko's hair or just alter her high to that of Makoto's
Guest chapter 18 . 10/31/2014
In Ranma's speech to Naruto you should have added

"they with a couple exceptions* have abandoned me before & I have no doubt that one they will all do so again, probably permenantly but now at least I have friends to turn to"

* Akane & Kasumi didn't when he was kicked out because of Happosai, Shampoo/Cologne/Ukyo & Akane didn't when he was weakened by Happosai & Akane didn't when Prince Herb locked him in cursed form
Guest chapter 12 . 10/31/2014
I know this is done but tat dosen't change the fact I tjought Pikachu's attack fails (as it does now 95% of the time) then as their gloating Jupiter shuld've looked at Pikachu & said together before they fire Thunderbolt & Supreme Thunderbolt
Chaosqueen chapter 5 . 10/30/2014
Ranma is to accepting of this it seems OOC. I can accept that he as accepted the curse especially if this after the series but for him to basically go "Oh I'm a Magic Girl, cool" is way out there. Then there's how he just accepts Luna, I admit creative way for him to overcome the Nekoken but it would have been better if he was in a ball or in a corner trying to block her out & she smacks him with her paw
TheHogwartsJagu chapter 17 . 1/1/2014
You got flames on this!? THIS, that is like perfektion covered in chocolate and Dylan Saunders voice! That person/persons must be somebody without anything better to do than look for mistakes because this and everything else I've been reading that you have wrote is, as I've already stated, perfection covered in chocolate and Dylan Saunders voice! I love your storys! Keep on wrighting them!
Future Nekomata chapter 20 . 6/1/2013
"Next there's Ranma Saotome or Saotome Ranma, at the age of 16 he's a skilled martial artist, with such mastery of attacks such as the Hiryu Shoten Ha, the Chestnuts Roasting on an Open Fire and more… even created some of his very own like the Moko Takabisha… he's the strongest of them all and the perfect choice for Sailor Jupiter the Senshi of Lighting and Wood"

I like how the most female ( if you count the curse) of the group is the senshi of wood.

P.S. I don't have a dirty mind, I have a smexy imagination. :3
Future Nekomata chapter 16 . 6/1/2013
"Oh Chopper!" said Luffy, "These are merriness Naruto and Ranma…"

Oh spellcheck...
anonymous chapter 43 . 1/7/2013
I absolutely LOVE your sstories! I can't wait to read more of them! They're so funny and have a good plot! I was wondering though,, for the sequal, will you be adding more dimensions for the sennshi of the astroid belt? And if you have yet to decide upon whom will be their reincarnations, may I suggest you look at Kyo Sohma from Fruits Basket and Ichigo Kurosaki from Bleach? Just image the looks on their faces, and the faces of the people around them if they turned out to be crossdressing interdimennsional superhero(ine)s!
FaithfulAizen chapter 43 . 9/17/2012
I loved this story emma let me know if your ex causes trouble I'll annoy him under a different name so he wont find me
FaithfulAizen chapter 33 . 9/16/2012
can I still chew him out?
FaithfulAizen chapter 26 . 9/15/2012
I just a really funny idea what if one of the outer scouts was smoker it would have been awkward and funny just thinking about is making me laugh like crazy
FaithfulAizen chapter 6 . 9/14/2012
I'm gonna be funny and say that "it" is there period (jk)
psychicshipping chapter 16 . 5/21/2012
Excellent story, but it's hard to understand you at times. Be it grammar, spelling, or outright forgetting words. I hate to see such a good story marred by misunderstanding. I suggest getting a beta reader and sending these chapter to them to be edited.
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