Thank you for the story. It was greatly appreciated. I loved the scene where Dean beats up the Impala and your description was great. I love Dean coming to see what Sam did to himself by accident too and then taking care of Sam. Very very nice.

Sam always makes it about jim its kinda pathetic.

This story rocks!

Fabulously written. I so very much enjoyed reading this. Very moving and you captured Sam and Dean just right.

Ummm well i might get bitched at for this but * hugs Dean quickly before he can run away *
Dean: wha? What the hell , get off me ! God you're worse than Sam
Me: * letting go of him * awww but * now employing the "little lost puppy dog look" but Dean , if you want Sam to leave you alone then atleast let me stay, I can even help , either with the car or entertaining Sam if I need to aaaannnnd best of all I can cook and it's actually edible and tastes good
Dean:*thinking that statement over for a minute * you can cook?
Me : *slightly offended now * well yea , seriously Dean do I look like I can't cook, I might now be the strongest or most athletic person ever and i'm an even bigger klutz that Sam on occasion but I can cook and probally keep your brother from driving you and Bobby insane
Dean : hmmm ... Okay then since you can cook an keep Sammy out of our hair then you can stay for now
Me: hm for now? * in full sarcasm mode now * well gee Dean that's considerate of you, * being perfectly sincere now* you do know that you are going to eventually talk to Sam though right ? That you can't just keep trying to ignore it like if you do suddenly you'll be fine , and before you start bitching that you already told Sam you didn't want to talk about it that's all I really had to say about it other than that he's just worried about you Dean that's why he's trying to get you to talk thinking maybe if you get it off your chest then it might be easier to deal with that's all , well I'm going to go inside now and try to see what Damage Sam did to the kitchen and then I'm going to fix something to eat and you ARE going to eat no ifs ands or buts , you need real food not just M&M's

"Everybody Loves A Clown" was a very sad episode, and you've done an excellent job in supplying an additional scene for it.

Loved all the brotherly love, and Bobby's role in it was excellent.

Great stuff. 8)

- Coolest Badguy EVER

Awesome fic. You got the boys spot on there, absolutely perfect.

Great story. You captured the guys emotions so well.

Great story, the beginning of season two was somewhat difficult for Sam and Dean, wasn't it?

Love it!

Bobby frowned at him, crossed his arms over his chest. “Did you not just here me say he was hemorrhaging all over my fucking rug?”

It should be spelled "hear."

I've noticed several other minor mistakes, grammar, spelling, and structural, in your other fics but I really wanted to finish all the Brotherhood stories before I attempted to reread them again to write reviews commenting on my thoughts and noting the minor errors.

In any case, I love the stories, I'll write more on that fact later - this was just to comment on the homophone error.

Wow - this was a great story. I particularly liked the line: "Sam briefly wondered how long a person could go without physical contact and retain the very thing that made them human." Excellent! And the ending was perfect.

Aww that was awesome. I loved that. Great characterization.

Another great tag to ELAC. Dean still has some healing to do, but a least he finally talked to Sammy for a bit.

"Just give me some time."

"But I don't know what to do until then."

Dean nearly laughed. There it was again, Sammy dumping his broken toy at his feet, holding his boo-boo out for a magical kiss." Love it. Sheer brilliance.

Beautifully written. It's clear that you've got a perfect characterisation on the boys, because you've written this well before "Tall Tales" aired and you have Dean saying: "We might as well be conjoined twins" which is SO similar to what is said to Bobby in the aforementioned episode.

Cheers,

Sera