Reviews for Star Light, Star Bright
LivingInALostGeneration chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
oh my, this was soo sad. but i loved it anyway! xxx
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Well written. Maybe an eclipse?
ALPS chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
this is really good, a great continuation for Star Spirit. and i cried.. thanks for that. :)) it's so ironic, that the one night when Edward really wanted to see Bella's star, there were no stars, the sky was dark. is the star spirit thing your own idea or is that based on a myth? if you thought of that yourself, you are an absolutely cool person. if not. well you're still cool, you're writing style is awesome :D
VampsMoonAngel chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
I don't really understand the question your asking but I forgot to ask you this question last time and they - as in the computer - wouldn't let me redo so I want to ask now if it's okay ; as in not stealing but in asking permission; if I could barrow ur star story. Of course I'll say that it was from you i just want to ask if i could borrow the star thing. In my own little swich of the star story.
Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
Really loved it...

Thought it was so sad... just like most of New moon...
DazzlingTopaz1901 chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
is the reason why he cant see her spirit star because she died on the inside of a broken heart when edward left? i think you should continue with the story.
The Dark Lord Drama el Llama chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
He couldn't see her start because sometimes the moon is SO bright out that it outshines the light from the starts.

Also... he's halfway aroung the world, south that is. The stars there would be different than the ones in the northern hemisphere, so he wouldn't see 'her star'. :D

And the moon thing, but different continent, differnt hemisphere, different placement of stars, differnt stars altogether!

Considering he's been alive for 104 years (in Newmoon anyways) you'd think he'd know that, eh?

*Rain
Edward left me here chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
love the second one even more please make another one!
Jasmine chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
That story was really good...i enjoyed it immensely! And why couldn't Edward see Bella's star? That's the only thing that bothered me...your other one was just as well written as this one...i would have reviewed it but my internet shut me down and i couldnt find it! I'm so glad i found this one though! You are a very good author and should continue writing! Good job at writing this story and i really can't give much criticism except...well...theres..no that's not right...there really isn't anything i can criticize! I really like it...keep up the good work! and please tell me why Edward couldn't see Bella's star...i'm confused...and very curious..don't make me turn out like the cat!
Neko Alice-chan chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Oh, wow . . . So beautiful! Oh, I'd be so worried if I hadn't already read New Moon! And the Spirit Mate idea, it's so original! You're very talented, the writings very beautiful! Keep writing!
crystalwolfberri chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
that was extremely deep. seriously! that was just, wow. I love the whole 'spirit mate' thing, and it all worked out that on the one day Edawrd neded to see Bella's star, the night was black. / a wonderful oneshot, though, thanks! n.n
VictoriaOke chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
0- i have a guess as to why he couldn't see it. she wasn't shining very brightly at all for most of New Moon. :-\
bella45 chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Wow I really liked this did you make the star soul mate plot up or was it based in A real myth? I would like to know why he could not see her star? Was it because that when she jumped and was in the water and was drowning that her heart stoped and was techinal dead but they brought her back if not I would like to hear what happened Anyway great story you should keep writing:):)
VampiressE12B chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
YOu-you-you made me cry! Me of all people! YOu are one heck of a writer! Now, TEL ME!
Heather chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
I loved your stories...and now I am really curious why Edward could not see Bella's star...please let me know. I also think you should continue the story...it is a great story line.

Thanks,

Heather
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