Reviews for Mahou no Shinobi
Pushi19 chapter 3 . 4/22
Mahou no Shinobi Update it soon please please
lrsddg3 chapter 1 . 8/25/2020
Interesting enough that naruto originally going to use magic and not jutsu when it was creating.
Pushi19 chapter 3 . 1/17/2020
Mahou no Shinobi Please update soon in be waiting for 15 year
Pushi19 chapter 2 . 1/3/2019
Mahou no Shinobi
Please update it soon waiting for 11 year for update
Monster King chapter 3 . 11/19/2018
Hope you have not given up on it
Guest chapter 2 . 8/16/2018
He wore the "mask" FAR TOO LONG (I always thought it was pretty STUPID to wear at all), in fact MOST of the bad things that happen to naruto are REALLY his own fault... He needs to SHOW STRENGTH, start beating people into the hospital VERY EARLY, start SHOWING he IS IN FACT powerful, then he'll gain what he wants, all the mask does is SHOOT HIMSELF in the foot!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2018
I like this one, naruto is something UNIQUE, he should be, NOBODY ELSE in the entire naruo-verse equals him, he should be unique... His psions? Why not make them detiy level? He can't control his chkra which is beyond anything, anyone can do.. so give him an edge.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2018
Realy in the naruto-verse, nobody else deserves psionics.. everyone else is KINDA WEAK... sasuke, well kinda obvious, pein, tobi, all really WEAK... as far as mentality, orochi maybe but I'd think abandoning body after body has a COST (this would be one of them) MOST powers have a COST.. but due to the dip-sh*t third, naruto has already paid the cost for most.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2018
Ex. "wizard spells" barely show a trace, "naruto jutsu REARRANGE LANDSCAPES!,kismae and others use the powers in MILES wide distance ROLF"
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2018
And somehow, hinata, sakura or any others are supposed to be "OKAY" with him being a her huh?... Yeah that's normal.

Also with the HP and naruto crosses? I can't think of ANYTHING more cross, hp is boring, it's more or less IRL, naruto-verse is ANYTHING but that, those two do NOT intersect.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
all this is is basterdized harry potter naruto cross over go die in one of your plot hols you unorigunel reatarted fucker
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 3 . 9/30/2016
Cool fix!
Wolfone10 chapter 2 . 9/30/2015
I like the idea of a magic using naruto or in this case naruko.. As long as she doesn't like dudes(that would make me a little sick), I have a few suggestions, that you might find helpful, I have an entire FOUR BOOKS of spells that she could use, 4 books of potions for her teammates (so not lone WOLFIN it, and four books of items, clothing, WEAPONS that the ninja world has never seen, and I'm willing to help but it HAS TO YURI, not DUDES, that to me is gross, and yayoi and you should have warned me before hand.
Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
Why would the hyuuga hate the kyuubi(and thus naruto) more then most? Not many Hyuuga would have died, I mean they fight hand-to-hand, and what kinda complete drooling moron fights a 300 ft tall super demon that's very TOUCH sets you on fire/eats at you like acid? If a lot of hyuuga died during the attack, I say it's Darwinism at work, the gene pool would be better without them!
Pushi19 chapter 3 . 8/19/2015
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