hey white soul :)

your fic seems nice, yeah Rukawa is OOC but peoples characters change and i think that if you were able to justify the change (not an overnight rushed love scenario) you will have a very good fic... Yuka is not a Haruko type of girl right? she is a tomboy, now this is a relief... waiting for your next chapter...

Liked it very much.A big round of ,a marriage that doesn't involve potential,keep it up!

I know it is to no purpose, but I spotted the link to this story on Bet You Love That's blog, and it was too tempting to resist. I don't think I have much to say except that it wasn't Rukawa who was drunk- It was you when you wrote this. BYLT has already said it all.

ur fic...i really love it!

Please, please, please erase this horrid piece of evil from my sight. Away from human premises. I don't... I just can't grasp Rukawa here. Shouldn't the guy be instead an OC? He seemed every bit like some pervert else. Some pervert you dream of wanting you, which isn't going to happen so long as the earth lasts. I don't know anymore what to say. Just erase this and let us live peacefully. I fancy I'd have nightmares about this fic tonight. God forbid.

Is this a parody? Because I would appreciate the integrity of the fic if it is, but it says it's romance, so... I honestly think that you should rework on this one; for one thing, narrations are rushed and the descriptions are bleak. I also fear that if you make this fic progress, as your summary implied; we might get how a Mary Sue stole Kaede's heart from all other imperfect beings.

No, I didn't enjoy it. Sorry. _

You know...I'm so jealous of Yuka right now!...Update! I wanna read more...the story is just to my taste! Hyahaha!

Ja~

- Sayuri