Reviews for Sing Along Mockingbird
xxxMusarockz chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
It was incredible! From the details to the description of emotion. Never have I read something on here of such good quality! It really was amazing but damn was it long!

xxxMusarockz chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
It was incredible! From the details to the description of emotion. Never have I read something on here of such good quality! It really was amazing but damn was it long!

ThePersonYouDontKnow chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Awesome writing! Not the perverted part, but the beginning was amazing. If I were you, I wouldnt waste my talent on fanfiction, I would write books!
RosieGurrl chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
I've yet to read where you've given them a happy ending. *sigh*

But you do it in such a beautiful way, it's hard to feel upset at you.
NoLongerWriting-AbandonedAccou chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Wow... that was beautiful.

It had a very dark air, depressing and filled with harsh and painful emotion. It was morbid in a beautiful way... if you understand what I mean.

They're torturing themselves... and hurting themselves.

The way you had Caleb think of Matt as a coward was great.

This was incredibly sad but touching and really beautiful.

...I hate sad endings but it worked and the title... wonderful since you had Caleb phrase how it would be like asking a babe not to cry and... a mocking bird not to sing... so he'll let Will sing along...

So SAD! It worked but they both are foolish in their frozen pain of that timeless mistake Matt had made.

I also loved the part where Caleb was referring to himself as selfish and how if he had her heart... he wouldn't let it go either.

Beatiful and though I don't do sad endings or overly angsty fics, well worth it.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
strayphoenix chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
When the CxC fan says she likes it, you KNOW it's famazing.

...OK, so I copy/pasted it into Word and replaced all instances of 'Will, red, and brown' with 'Cornelia, blonde, and blue' but it's still really well written!

ebony chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
That was so good. I loved it. I mean the way you went thourgh the emotions and actions was simply beautiful.
ff-kh-luvrgrl chapter 1 . 2/8/2007

that was so sweet... and yet so sad...

(my 2 fave pairings from WITCH are WillCaleb and WillMatt)

i loved it!
Kiana Epona chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Wow amazing

"And then slowly, agonizingly slowly, he eased a finger into her willing passage whilst his thumb held and strokeed the top of her heat."

I need a cold shower!
Moonlight Shadow4 chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
I honestly have to much I enjoyed this one-shot. While it may seem silly, the last paragraph hit me the strongest. I'm going thorugh a rather tough time with the person I love, and I'm not exactly having the best spot with him.

I love him, he loves me, but there's something amiss and we're not together - held apart now when we weren't once before. A lot of questions I want answered...but I don't know, anymore...

I guess the notion of seeing Caleb regret the words left unspoken and Will turning away because it's the noble thing...reminded a lot of the one I love and I. He tries to do the noble thing but...sometimes the "noble" thing really isn't such a good thing in the long run...
GohanRULEZ chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
it was a sad story but a good one i like ti nice job
Memory in Crimson chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
Oh gods, you absolutely slay me with your words. Oh, my breath - robbed of my breath! Damn you in the most beautiful way! (faints happily)
noperfect917 chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
poor poor caleb
Hells agent chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
HOLY crap. Or not so holy, whatever. This story is... quite simply, amazing.

Though I sort of skipped through the "mhm" part (well, I'm EXPECTED to, at the very least, considering that I'm a very innocent natured 14 years old), still I loved the angst, the flow, the overall plot; and as Goldfish Demon mentioned, Matt is dead. Let's throw a party.

In a strange way, Will was the one perfectly "in character", while Caleb reminded me mostly of his comic version; but knowing that you prefer comic over the show (or at least I think you did... eh) it might be expected to be that way.

Once again, you managed to amaze me with another breathtakingly perfect story *yeah, I'm at odds with words nowadays...* and push me deeper into my Worshiper state. What to say, I love the way you write and build your characters from kiddy, random funnies to ideal protagonists...


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