Reviews for I Am Also Thy Brother
Aracely chapter 107 . 8/27/2023
Hola, es 2023 y e terminado de leerte, es espectacular si lo publicaras en físico estaría encantada de comprarlo y retribuirte un poco, amo tu historia y gracias al traductor de Google te pude leer. Gracias por todo.
Tony Moonstone chapter 107 . 8/22/2023
Well I have to say.
It took me 45 days to read from book1-book7.
It's one of the longest fanfiction that I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
So many twists and turns and many things that differ from the books greatly.
Loads of Oc characters and a great storytelling.
There were times I admit that were boring and drew out the story longer than expected but soon got back into it after some time away.
I'm so going to get all my friends to read this truly great work of Art.
Thanks so much for writing it.
As always
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 80 . 8/20/2023
Indigena Yaxley was an interesting if not deadly character.
I called her in this story Poison Ivy cause that who I was reminded about her when reading about her.
Her demise was fitting.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 66 . 8/18/2023
Damn you, DAMN YOU!
Tears falling from my face with such sorrow.
McGonagall you will forever be a hero, a true Gryffindor. Your sacrifice was very noble.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 59 . 8/17/2023
That was a super intensely, mystical, supernatural kind of chapter.
It was sending Goosebumps down my arms with the thrill of it all.
Good vs Evil, White vs Dark, Yin vs Yang.
I'm such shocked by this chapter.
Onward I go after a good night's sleep.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 32 . 8/16/2023
That was an EXTREMELY hard chapter to read.
My heart goes out to Medusa and Eos.
I so hope that Harry will dish out some powerful dark justice to the ones who harmed them.
Most shocking chapter to date.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 19 . 8/14/2023
I noticed I’m the first person this year to review for 2023. This was an AWESOME battle scene with 2 powerful Lords helping Harry.
It was so great to read about it.
Liking this final book of this storyline more and more.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 2 . 8/14/2023
Such a devastating start to the final book.
Time to grieve and plot.
Harry now in my opinion is so strong and powerful, that's its scary.
Will Harry get his revenge?
I'm sure I'll find out soon.
Take care and be well!
Reaver chapter 107 . 5/29/2022
Seven days. And a quarter if you count the extra six hours beyond the perfect 168 that constitute a week.
And of course Draco has the last word. Of course.
Scattered fragments of nonsense that I began to write down after the fifth installment:
Falco fell too easily. I know he had flaws and such, but he suffered many defeats that he should have caught in some subtle way. Although I do suppose his ability to adapt was severely hampered by his longevity.
Some things - especially in the beginning - you rushed or glossed over. It is not so bad in a fanfiction, but this story is more than such, and for this I believe it should have at least given a more thorough introduction.
When touching upon old subjects to remind readers, it is better to only devote - at most - a phrase of few words to summarize everything, rather than spending a paragraph reminding the reader of such. It really jars me to find a particularly engaging scene be interrupted by information that the reader should be aware of.
I saw a lot of revelations, but very little reparation. Obviously there was development, but nowhere close to the extent that should have happened during each spike of realization. Unless that was a piont you were trying to make? Likely. I am too ignorant to grasp at such things.
Please brainstorm more swears than Merlin. It got overused to the point where I cringed. Create lesser ones too! This was one place in your worldbuilding that fell very flat. It's something I struggle with a lot myself.
I did not like the idea of "polarizing" ideals into Light and Dark; however, you played the shades of grey very well, in a way that would not have been possible without the first distinction between black and white.
I am no fan of Drarry. However, I would have to be blind, excessively proud, and beyond stupid to ignore how masterfully you depicted the ship, and how, overall, it provides an overarching, essential complexity to the story that I adore.
This was an amazing project. I am still trying to figure out how you wrote, on average, 8000 final words each day. And it sounds like you took very many days off. How are you even able to achieve such a feat?
It does not matter. This story is, was, and will. For me, it is over. I do not know if I will read it again in my life, but I will remember.
You finished this in 2007. It is 2022 when I am writing this. I do not remember all the dates, but you worked on these before the turn of the second decade of the millenium. How are you? What do you do these days? Are you well, and, perhaps less than that but altogether more important, are you alive? Do you ever check on your fanfiction or other works, wondering of the legacy left for us to discover?
Take heart that your story has not died, however secluded its last location is (all other links, including the ones on your profile page, seem to be taken down) during these past 17-odd years after your arc has concluded. May the flash of lightning be imprinted forevermore.
Reaver chapter 104 . 5/29/2022
Makes you wonder how long until the next calamity occurs? And what happens when the "good" side fails, and whether the "bad" reigns forever or when the "good" side can fight its way back again?
I loved the snapshots. Not words I liked, but the story they told I did.
Reaver chapter 103 . 5/29/2022
Argutus! Was wondering when we'd hear back from him...
I'm actually a bit disappointed by the lack of deaths. Sorry.
Reaver chapter 102 . 5/29/2022
So... does Snape...
Reaver chapter 98 . 5/29/2022
Thank god for the switching potion. Not what I expected, but close enough for me to laugh at how wrong and right I was.
two and ... infinite, I suppose. I will cradle the two and nod to the unending abyss of mistakes made
Reaver chapter 96 . 5/29/2022
Hmph. I thought a Switching Potion would give more umph! to the end. One last devastating deception. But this works. I have difficulty seeing the end game when I start. Something that clearly you don't have hardship with.
Reaver chapter 94 . 5/29/2022
That was a beautiful dance. But the game can still go on.
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