Reviews for I Am Also Thy Brother |
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![]() ![]() I’ve never felt so sad after a long book, this is the best fanfic I’ve had see, thank you so much, thanks |
![]() ![]() This is such a stunningly well written chapter. I love how you tied together all the details. |
![]() ![]() Wow. Just discovered this story about a month ago and read the whole arc. You are an incredible storyteller. I don’t know I’d you ever check this site anymore but I am awestruck and want to go see if you ever published |
![]() ![]() Hard to believe I'm done reading this story. It has accompanied me for months, bringing me joy and pain, suspense and hope. It is so intense. I don't even know if you still read reviews, but I couldn't leave without saying thank you. |
![]() ![]() Hola, es 2023 y e terminado de leerte, es espectacular si lo publicaras en físico estaría encantada de comprarlo y retribuirte un poco, amo tu historia y gracias al traductor de Google te pude leer. Gracias por todo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I have to say. It took me 45 days to read from book1-book7. It's one of the longest fanfiction that I've ever had the pleasure of reading. So many twists and turns and many things that differ from the books greatly. Loads of Oc characters and a great storytelling. There were times I admit that were boring and drew out the story longer than expected but soon got back into it after some time away. I'm so going to get all my friends to read this truly great work of Art. Thanks so much for writing it. As always Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Indigena Yaxley was an interesting if not deadly character. I called her in this story Poison Ivy cause that who I was reminded about her when reading about her. Her demise was fitting. Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooo! Damn you, DAMN YOU! Tears falling from my face with such sorrow. McGonagall you will forever be a hero, a true Gryffindor. Your sacrifice was very noble. Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That was a super intensely, mystical, supernatural kind of chapter. It was sending Goosebumps down my arms with the thrill of it all. Good vs Evil, White vs Dark, Yin vs Yang. I'm such shocked by this chapter. Wow! Onward I go after a good night's sleep. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an EXTREMELY hard chapter to read. My heart goes out to Medusa and Eos. I so hope that Harry will dish out some powerful dark justice to the ones who harmed them. Most shocking chapter to date. Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed I’m the first person this year to review for 2023. This was an AWESOME battle scene with 2 powerful Lords helping Harry. It was so great to read about it. Liking this final book of this storyline more and more. Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a devastating start to the final book. Time to grieve and plot. Harry now in my opinion is so strong and powerful, that's its scary. Will Harry get his revenge? I'm sure I'll find out soon. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() Seven days. And a quarter if you count the extra six hours beyond the perfect 168 that constitute a week. And of course Draco has the last word. Of course. Scattered fragments of nonsense that I began to write down after the fifth installment: Falco fell too easily. I know he had flaws and such, but he suffered many defeats that he should have caught in some subtle way. Although I do suppose his ability to adapt was severely hampered by his longevity. Some things - especially in the beginning - you rushed or glossed over. It is not so bad in a fanfiction, but this story is more than such, and for this I believe it should have at least given a more thorough introduction. When touching upon old subjects to remind readers, it is better to only devote - at most - a phrase of few words to summarize everything, rather than spending a paragraph reminding the reader of such. It really jars me to find a particularly engaging scene be interrupted by information that the reader should be aware of. I saw a lot of revelations, but very little reparation. Obviously there was development, but nowhere close to the extent that should have happened during each spike of realization. Unless that was a piont you were trying to make? Likely. I am too ignorant to grasp at such things. Please brainstorm more swears than Merlin. It got overused to the point where I cringed. Create lesser ones too! This was one place in your worldbuilding that fell very flat. It's something I struggle with a lot myself. I did not like the idea of "polarizing" ideals into Light and Dark; however, you played the shades of grey very well, in a way that would not have been possible without the first distinction between black and white. I am no fan of Drarry. However, I would have to be blind, excessively proud, and beyond stupid to ignore how masterfully you depicted the ship, and how, overall, it provides an overarching, essential complexity to the story that I adore. This was an amazing project. I am still trying to figure out how you wrote, on average, 8000 final words each day. And it sounds like you took very many days off. How are you even able to achieve such a feat? It does not matter. This story is, was, and will. For me, it is over. I do not know if I will read it again in my life, but I will remember. You finished this in 2007. It is 2022 when I am writing this. I do not remember all the dates, but you worked on these before the turn of the second decade of the millenium. How are you? What do you do these days? Are you well, and, perhaps less than that but altogether more important, are you alive? Do you ever check on your fanfiction or other works, wondering of the legacy left for us to discover? Take heart that your story has not died, however secluded its last location is (all other links, including the ones on your profile page, seem to be taken down) during these past 17-odd years after your arc has concluded. May the flash of lightning be imprinted forevermore. |
![]() ![]() Makes you wonder how long until the next calamity occurs? And what happens when the "good" side fails, and whether the "bad" reigns forever or when the "good" side can fight its way back again? I loved the snapshots. Not words I liked, but the story they told I did. |
![]() ![]() Argutus! Was wondering when we'd hear back from him... I'm actually a bit disappointed by the lack of deaths. Sorry. |