Reviews for Falling
Yoda's Padawan chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Dude. *Blinks*
Cat in the web chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
Very good writing! But really sad...
Lady Starscream chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Just one question. Who was it that was falling?

By the way, sorry I haven't been at the RPG lately. I've been studying for my G.E.D. test, and working on my site. It's getting a dot com address in two weeks, and I have get 20 something pages up before then. But I'll be back soon(sooner than two weeks), I promise. .'
Fix-It Alchemist chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Ironhide(OC): The same thing happens to even human...(was very pissed today)

Me: A come on I was just playing! I did mean to offend you!

Ironhide: Right, don't worry I won't drop you.(he said this with much excitement)

Me: REALLY!

Ironhide: Sure today's opposite day. :D

Me: Ah fuck, AH!(being dropped from the Grand Canyon)

Ironhide: Don't worry you won't feel anything when you spinal cord breaks!I come off you later!

Me: AH!THE FANFIC WAS VERY SAD, BUT THIS IS JUST PLAIN STUPID! IRONHIDE GET BACK HERE YOU TINCAN HEAD!
Syntia13 chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Moving. What else can I say?
Super Metal Sonic chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
That's was good, interasting ending
TheDrifterAuthor chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Cool, but sad. You could have at least described the battle to make her THAT bent out of shape. :(
Thatredcar chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
damn.. that was like one dream what i have seen some time ago.. the feeling of flying and then dieing.. damn.. but before that.. was so temptationg feeling of car racing..

good story.. one damn good story..