Reviews for Snow White Queen
jkt7 chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I liked it. Its not often I get to see Edward so desperate. And it was okay that he slept. It fit. Sometimes I wonder why the biting is painful. In other books, its pleasant. Hhmmm...
Perpetual Optimistic Gloom chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Awwwwwwwww, that's so sweet. It's such a good songfic and Snow White Queen fits the story perfectly! I hope Esme wasn't hurt when Edward pushed her...
N.C. Stormeye chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
It scared me for a moment, but it was great.
Agony of a Loveless Eternity chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
I loved it. No really, I did. But Edward can't sleep. Thats the only thing that jumped out at me. But I loved it so much I didn't notice until I reread it the third time. So props to you!
hunny69 chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
again. making me cry...

do you want to embarrase me.

if i werent so...

anyway.

it was really good.

loved it as always.

love ya.

hunny
just a little wicked chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Woah, that song was so perfect. I love that song, but you know I never thought about it that way. It's like that song was written for this fic. And woah, you seemed to capture Edward perfectly. Although, tears wouldn't threaten to fall. Vampires, well not in the Twilight world, can't cry. Only tearless sobs. Anyway, supurb job nonetheless. -adds to favorites-
phix27 chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
Edward doesn't sleep. But, that's the only thing I found. very good. 10/10
Alexandra Stone chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
i really like the song! :D poor edward!:( but did you mention that he was sleeping? i thought Steph's vamps couldnt sleep?
shinacake chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
wait, so, did she die? i hope not.

i was listenig to Snow White Queen when i stumbled upon this, i was like, omg, thats neat. but its really good, i like reading in Edwards point of view. nice job!
Just A Little Bit Dramatic chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Hey, I love this! And the song! God, yeah. Great work! Gong on my favs!
TooMuchLoveforEdward chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Why was Edward so cruel? I mean, he'd never be like that and vamps can't sleep! But that's okay, I would really enjoy reading more!
J.S. Mews chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Very nice job. Just remember - vampires can't sleep.
Asquared91 chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
I like it! I love the angst! Angst is good when it is done well, and it was done well here!

Alison
IsabellaSwan13 chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Edward can sleep? Since when? Lol.

I liked your story, but I didn't like Edward doing that to Bella (not the changing, the abandoning thing). I doubt that edward would ever yell at bella for screaming as she was being changed... he didn't really yell though...

Very nice writing. Loved it despite it didn't seem like Edward would do that. And I absolutley love Evanescence (i'm obsessed), so the Snow White Queen song totally made it really good! :D
BlaineAndersonLover chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
WOW that's good! keep going!