|Reviews for Drifting Asleep|
| Brisalad chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
this is so sweet, you write another chapter :)
| Eve chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I love the ending! So cute and fluffy!
| randommonkeyz998 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
XD love it!
| kyunggy chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
| AjsusbxI'msj chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
lol i like the ending "want to explain that?" "hormones" good enough for me"
| KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
LOL! The sly dog! XD nice one
| smc1214 chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
Love how Aang was like 'hormones?' HUH! Very funny, and cute!
| Ur w0rst niightm4r3 chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
“Hey Katara, I’m really tired, so I’m gonna hit the sac, night”said Aang. I think it's "sack."
You could use more detail, but I'm so glad that I found someone else on this website that uses semi-colons.
You missed a bit of puncuation.
“Your face, your...your blushing?” The second "your" is actually supposed to be "you're" because it is a contraction of 'you' and 'are'.
The ending was really cute, and I think it suited the idea without going into tonsil hockey (which I can't play because MY tonsils were removed when I was five!) It's good that you got across the idea of sexual attraction without the lime/lemon thing ruining the cuteness and innocence.
This is, seriously, one of the better "Katara gives Aang 'The Talk of Doom'" one-shots I have read.
| Nyrick chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
I loved it!
| Mcwheeler12 chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
I loved it! It was so funny :D
| Death's-Razor-Blade chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
that was great!
| NeverBreakXPact chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
lol little sneak. It was cute
| ScarUnfortunate chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
lol cute! I really like it! proceed!
| Writer for the Tylwyth Teg chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
Aw! That was so sweet! Reading this made my heart happy.
| frozenheat chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Oh Aang you cheecky little devil! Loved this to bits the kataang was awesome!