Reviews for Dawn
glowbox chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Super sweet and very true to character, you are an amazing writer
scenicworld chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Probably my favorite Royai piece I've ever read, which is saying a whole damn lot. Good lord you're a beautiful writer.
Starship Artisan chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
That was very nice, good work!
dandoune chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
That was really beautiful.. so peacefull :)
MistyDelusions chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Beautiful. I love how you wrote the way Roy and Riza would act when they're together. I could clearly see the scenes playing in my head, the internal dialogue, the narrative point of view - all of it was lovely. I hope you can make more Royai stories. I enjoy your work much.
Alyice chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Oh gods, I love this. You write so beautifully and descriptively. Amazingly well done.
Dark Midnight chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
aw...I love the last line! _ really great. omg I just love it!
OTP chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
aw sweet ficcy
kaely chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
It’s SO sweet! I like your style of writing.

Royai forever!
Nilmiel chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
You're my hero.

...

no, seriously, this was amazing. The language was absolutes beautiful, the whole thing flowed beautifully. You really captured their feelings wonderfully; I love it!

One question: Was this anime or manga based, or a combo of both? Cause I saw elements of both in there, and I was just curious.

Anyways, I love it, and cant wait to read more from you!

-Nilmiel
Hayashi Azuma chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
...ah...

-in awe-

...

-still in awe-

...

-still awing-

...'p-please, PLEASE. keep writing...! XD
momiji-k chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Wonderful! That was an excellent bit of writing full of vibriant descriptions and warm feelings. You have a great talent for words. I do hope you have more Roy and Riza stuff that you have written. I would love to see a whole story. I'm off to check now... and if I don't find anything else I hope some day I will. _
FMA4EVER chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
oh...my...goodness...

that was breathtaking! i love it with a passion! you have such a wonderful way with words! i love it!

i give it a 10 out of 10! _~*

in Christ,

~FMA4EVER~
Princess Blade chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
My initial reaction: That was awesome!

My favorite thing about this piece is the imagery. Every thing you wrote, I could see-and it was gorgeous. :) Very lovely piece of Royai.
lili chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
This is very poetic, and extremely beautiful.
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