Reviews for Gotcha!
Sky Pie chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
I liked the story concept. Very funny.
Lerrinus chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
*falls off chair laughing*
anonymos chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
Lol! That was really funny!
Scott chapter 1 . 7/12/2001
This story is so funny. I love what Lucas did to Ben.
missy chapter 1 . 8/2/2000
Sammy chapter 1 . 7/1/2000
Great story! I thought it was hilarious!
Tracy Thalbert chapter 1 . 6/13/2000
Wow! With friends like these, Ben doesn't need enemies. I would hate to see what they'd do to the poor guy if they didn't like him.
Lindsay chapter 1 . 6/7/2000
The basic idea of pulling an April Fool's prank on Ben is a good one. However, there are some problems in the execution. The extraneous information provided about Lucas' mall trip only serves to distract the reader and isn't needed for the plot to move forward. Technical errors and awkward phrasing disrupt the over all flow, but would be easily fixed with more careful editing. As for the prank itself, it seemed a bit extreme and more like public humiliation than an innocent joke on a friend. I had a hard time believing that Lucas would have gone to such lengths and that if he had, Tim and Miguel would let it go so far.