|Reviews for What If I Fell In Love|
| anonymous chapter 2 . 4/4/2007
yay! this is a really great story so far. please update soon :D
| Bunnybaby144 chapter 2 . 3/19/2007
plz plz updatesoon
| luckyazn1177 chapter 2 . 1/15/2007
i-i- I Love this! It's different from the other "Hinata is a real princess" fics, something like this should be continued!
| punkette kagome chapter 2 . 10/15/2006
this chapter was really good! I love how naruto and sasuke argue! and Hinata was really cute too! Neji and tenten I can see something will happen really soon! Well please update soon!
| joekool chapter 2 . 10/15/2006
hm hinata seems to have problems... how will you make naruto solve it? make him enter the castle? or will hinata run away again?
| joekool chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
very cute fic! i like your writing style as i can 'feel' the characters emotions. keep up the good work!
| C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 2 . 10/14/2006
| Lavabear chapter 2 . 10/14/2006
It was really good!
Just two things that I noticed:
The chapter thingy up at the top right corner says: "What if I Envy" but you put down as the chapter name (at the top) as: "What if I Tried" Just pointing that out.
"dragging the girl who would rather be sleeping with her."...
Just pointing those two things out.
By the way... Have you read my somewhat horror/mystery/whatever Naruto story? It's about Sakura as an old lady who comes across a very creepy girl. The first chapter might not be very good, but It'll get better & better.
| DoubleDee068 chapter 2 . 10/14/2006
ohh i like it please update sooN!
| Clover715 chapter 2 . 10/14/2006
uh YEAH! Most DEF. a really good chapter. I hearted it TONS AND TONS!
| C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Aw...Kinda gives u a suspenseful edge! DON'T PUT IN 2 MUCH DRAMA! I CAN'T TAKE THE PRESSURE!
| Clover715 chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
oh no! you stopped writing! You must must MUST continue, because it sounded really good! I thought there were more chapters and when i went to click for the next one there was NO BUTTON. so hurry scurry with the next one!
| punkette kagome chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
oh this story is so good! I totally love it! Naruto Sasuke and Sakura together are just adorable and how sasuke was like my turn to dance with my girl! Oh that was cute! I can't wait to see what happens next! so please update soon!
| Anonymous Joe chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
This is really good writing! Great concept for an AU story. Who cares if someone might have used it before, it is our own personal twists that make it ours, and you do this masterfully. You developed the characters quickly but efficiently. The only problem is some minor grammar problems but that happens to everyone. Well keep it up and remember “THIS IS YOUR STORY! Do what you want, don’t let the reviewers get you down."
Ich werde Sie später sehen!
| Lavabear chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
That was a pretty good story. I'd like to read more of your chapters.