Reviews for The Final Manuver
Pokepal Karai Natsume chapter 21 . 5/27/2009
Awesome. Stories that tell about Fool's past are really interesting to me. And Eric Stage, I think that was a good name to use as a real name for him.

Fool: Yay! It was me and Sora and we finally got married and...

Sora(Knocks Fool in the head) Shut up about it! It was only in the story!

Fool: Ow...

Me: Lol! Good story.
arya21 chapter 21 . 11/14/2008
are you the girl? well you are the only person I can think that they see everyday...
seienryu chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
i really love it...
blackmoral chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Wow this story had a great plot. At some point i thought Yuri was in love with Sora

haha it was a great story though.
Chaosmaiden07 chapter 14 . 5/6/2007
This is SO AWASOME! PLEASE MORE!
joshie chapter 21 . 4/16/2007
wow!youre really great!i really love your story!you story is unique and its not predictable!keep up the good work!i really love kaleido star!
RubyFernandezJR chapter 21 . 2/10/2007
OMG! I love this story!

your story should be turned into a dvd series as part

2 of kaleido star!

u should continue the story with the unknown writer revealing herself and falling in love with ken!(just a thougt)
phoenix of hell chapter 21 . 12/11/2006
Very interesting plot. I really never imagined Sora and Fool together, but you made it look natural! Write another one!
Chaosmaiden07 chapter 21 . 12/9/2006
This is such a great story! i love it! Can you writer another kaleido star story?
jean kitsune chapter 21 . 12/5/2006
thank you for writing this story
Elle-Mandi chapter 21 . 12/5/2006
WOW! Thanks for finishing it. It was awsome and the mystery at the end makes it even better.
Elle-Mandi chapter 17 . 12/1/2006
I love the beginning of chapter 17. I just read it six times over. Please update.

P.S. - Great job on the story, you have a wonderful talent at writing and i wish i could write like you.

haru-chan .
Elle-Mandi chapter 15 . 11/28/2006
OMG! I just read chapter 15 and i'm dying to read the rest. Please update.

P.S. - please make the chapters a little longer (if u can, i'm not forcing u)

haru-chan .
Elle-Mandi chapter 14 . 11/27/2006
Thanks for updating. I love the way this is going and i am going to keep reading. Please update SOON!

haru-chan .
Seuna Ailaera chapter 14 . 11/25/2006
This is an amazing story! Keep up the great work!

Btw, I thought it was fantastic how you got Sora-chan and Fool to get as close as they have.

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