Reviews for Emmett and the Motorcycle
Droobles92 chapter 6 . 11/28/2006
Your Story Was amazing ! well done ! I give you a (virtual) pat on the back ! I loved it ! I love how as I read I understand and love Emmetts personality and his relationship with Bella. The story truly was original. You should definatly write this from Edwards and Emmetts POV. I loved the story and job well done !
inusgirl1030 chapter 6 . 11/11/2006
yes i would love to hear this story from edward or emmett's pov
Cdabryhea chapter 4 . 11/3/2006
absolutely awesome chapter.:)
Angel6582 chapter 6 . 10/30/2006
Yay! I love how you had Bella ride with Edward. That was my favorite part of this whole story. I think it would be interesting to read the story in either of the guys point of view. I'm up for it! D
Angel6582 chapter 5 . 10/30/2006
Awesome chapter! Bella lesson with Emmett was great! I really like how you ended the chapter too!
Angel6582 chapter 4 . 10/30/2006
Great chapter! I still say that Edward should have Bella in a bubble when he isn't around. I think that she would be a lot safer. P I also really love how Bella needs to be told to breathe after kissing Edward. Those must be some amazing kisses. I need to get me some of those! P
NotMixedEqually chapter 6 . 10/27/2006
i think it would be interesting to see edward and emmett's POVs. you should definitely try it. update soon please!
nocens-somnium chapter 6 . 10/25/2006
I love this story! I've always wanted a motorcycle, and this makes me want one even more, Emmett and Edward included.
the indifferent child of earth chapter 6 . 10/25/2006
two things:

1. I LOVE this story

2. I think reading this story from Edward's and Emmett's POV would be awesome, especially Emmett's...hint, hint

great story! :)
Oh.Edward chapter 6 . 10/24/2006
awh that's such a cute ending! great story!

elle
RealMenSparkle chapter 6 . 10/24/2006
I think if some ppl want to hear the other POV's and some ppl don't you should put them in a different document i for one would love to hear the other stories

Your a great writer!
BlueSea14 chapter 6 . 10/23/2006
Very good and written nicely.

Yes, do this in both POV's. I want to know what Edward was doing when Bella was learning to ride her bike some more. And what Emmett really told Edward...:)
Magicgrl55 chapter 6 . 10/23/2006
Very nice chapter! I like it being told from bella's POV. Keep this writing up!
Dontlook702 chapter 6 . 10/23/2006
yes..yes..yes..a thousand times yes..i love this story..it had me smiling the whole time i read it..i want to read both pov..so my vote is that edward's and emmett's views in the story...yes...i can't wait..hope it's up soon..:)
Narita S chapter 6 . 10/23/2006
I want to hear the other point of views! And I love how Edward didn't get that mad, it just proves how understanding he is! Sigh.
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