Reviews for Letters to an Unborn Vampire
INVALID-Account08 chapter 8 . 12/23/2006
DARN YOU! HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE!
INVALID-Account08 chapter 6 . 12/23/2006
Got confused for a second in letter 6, thought it was the mother and i sort of gagged. still good though!
INVALID-Account08 chapter 3 . 12/23/2006
DUDE! there is no way that's an actual bride. Verona is too calm and controlled, Aleera is too,oh i dunno, possesive? and bratty?, and then of course, there's Marishka she's too young and carefree. i think a child like that would scare her. oh oh oh! i've got another for Aleera! CONCEITED! yeah, no why she's be able to deal with being prego!
INVALID-Account08 chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
that's so mecca cute! i'm writting one to and i so totally like the ideal of the bebe being a vampire baty thingy. do you mind if i do that too? if so, i'm so finna do it! keep writting!
Remember chapter 8 . 12/19/2006
I can't really review much now, and I'M SO SORRY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME! but I wanted you to know you're effin amazing! AND I LOVE THIS STORY! *sob* you're incredible...

-Rem
Media Maiden chapter 8 . 12/19/2006
Did you watch the new Fall Out Boy video on TRL? Anyways, I was a little confused by "that he might not realize they are there, but they are." Does he have feelings or not? Thanks for the update, it was good.
Riona Winters chapter 8 . 12/18/2006
Aw! That was so cute! I love it! Made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Haha. Kinda makes me want to forgive Dracula and then take him into a room with me a lock ourselves up for a good week and…

Dracula: *arches an eyebrow* We already did that, remember? I mean, I could always go for more…

Nienna: Uh…*ahem*…yeah, anyways…

Dracula: *chuckles* I love making her *points to Nienna who is blushing profusely* uncomfortable. Probably my most favored past time…

LOVE it…I’m so sad that its coming to an end…*sniff, sniff*…well, you will write another one, right? One with a ton of hot, steamy love scenes? Hee hee *blushes* ….right…anywho…

Can’t wait for more!
Riona Winters chapter 7 . 12/18/2006
Okay...so, it only took me, what...two weeks to review ONE chapter? Ugh...i admit, i'm pathetic. Haha...

Dracula: *smirks* My dear, you don't have to admit THAT, we all know it.

Nienna: *evil glare* Watch it, mister. You are cruisin for a bruisin...

Dracula: *bursts out laughing* Is that the BEST you can come up with, love? Pretty pathetic if you ask me...

Nienna:*face turns red with anger* GAH! You insufferable, egotistical, pig-headed, chauvinistic, womanizing, no good, low life!

Dracula: *deathly calm* That's it...you've pushed me too far...

Nienna: *meep*

Lovely chapter, Gypsy...short but sweet and very romantic. Can't wait to read the next one!
Ein Kampf kann eine Lebenszeit chapter 8 . 12/16/2006
OMG, HE IS BACK, YAY! Sorry I didn't review sooner, but it wasn't working properly. But now I will, and I will try to make it long, but you know me. What cracked me up was the line "well, undead life." I think it gives the bride a sense of humor, like Dracula. I also love how you have Dracula actually having feelings, that's how I understand it. And I love how the baby will raise the world's sight of her as Dracula's bride, you know, not just a 'peasant bride'. So this is as long as it will get, because you know me, so I loved it and absolutely cannot wait for more! LOVE IT SO MUCH!

a13
Lady Wednesday chapter 8 . 12/16/2006
Aw, that over-adoring bride part is cute!
Charmes Malheureux chapter 8 . 12/15/2006
You know, you'd be like really really proud of me, because I *actually* checked to make sure I know which story I'm reviewing this time! (So this one should make more sense. I promise not to ramble on about Verona.) ;)

But...but...A CLOSE? WHY? That makes my heart sad. :( Haley wuvs reading these..I will miss them! This was an awesome idea, and you have to promise to write other Van Helsing stuffs. Maybe more about this bride! I like her. She's not quite as psycho as the other ones. The other ones are all like, "Hey, look at us, we're all slutty and psycho and amazing" and this one's like, "Oh yeah, well I'm not, so..screw you!" Anyway, here's a random thought for you: I was at the doctor's office today and I saw Martina McBride on the cover of Country Music Magazine, and she looked like she could have been a bride..it was pretty creepy. She had this evil, crazy lookin smile, and it was seriously like she was about to grow fangs and jump out of the magazine and kill everybody. Plus, I think they mess around with all of her pictures and stuff to make her eyes this really freaky (pretty though) glowyful blue color.

Anyway, sorry for talking your ear off. Now to *finally* get to the letter. You know, I talk and talk and talk when I'm happy. So you're the one to blame for my running of mouth, because this letter made me all giddy..it was so sweet! All the letters kind of sound as if she's talking to herself along with her child, which serves to make them all the more heartfelt and passionate. You write feelings good. I know that sounded extremely retarded, but I'm kind of in an extremely retarded state right now, so bear with me.

And Dracula...*dreamy sigh* He thinks he's so hardcore, when really, we all know he's a sweety-poo. Okay, maybe he's a hardcore sweety-poo. Heck yes. That sounds muy sexy.

"Your father tells me I am more beautiful because I have you, that I glow, that I have a light about me only the living possess. I don’t doubt it, I am so very happy."

You see? That is SO cute. One of the things I like about the way you write Dracula is that you make him expressive and affectionate in a way that stays true to his character, instead of ruining his heartlessness (it's sad but true) or making him all gay and scary..

Anyways, there is your review, luv! I don't really want to go..I woke up around 7:30 and the house was dark and quiet and everyone was gone and they haven't come back yet and I'm SCARED! *whimpersniff*
thecat-and-thefiddle chapter 8 . 12/15/2006
Squee! So cute! She's so lovable... then again, who WOULDN'T be that insanely happy having the spawn of something as sexy as Dracula floating around inside your belly? _Write on! Write like the wind! But the wind can't write, so... uhm... Write like a really good writer person with the fastness of fast!
Media Maiden chapter 7 . 12/13/2006
I hope you find this amusing; you see I can only speak in an Transylvanian accent when I whisper so I scare my friend by speaking your story in that tone. I love your story; please update soon. It is so sad the child will not be born alive (Unless...) but I still get this "I can't wait till it comes" feeling.
Lady Wednesday chapter 7 . 12/12/2006
Did he leave her? Just wondering... i mean he is a guy and with all the other brides that he has... Great Chap!
Remember chapter 7 . 12/11/2006
Now then...

For starters, I freaking love this story. But you already knew that...

Secondly... I LOVE winter... but I hate getting sick. I just got over the cold of the century and the 24 hr. fleu... so I can sympathize with the sickiness... lol

And Thirdly... GET BETTER SOON! Pweeze? :)

-Remember

P.S. Sorry this review is crap. I'm very... uninpsired right now. But you're amazing and you don't need ME telling you. :)
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