Lola-Ladybug13 chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
I loved this! That last line was amazing! Awesome job! ]
nikki.02 chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Wow! For your first fic that is amazing!

I especially loved these ending lines, "She’s Lindsay Messer now, wedding band and all, for all the world to see. To me she’ll always be Montana. Forever mine."

Great story and strong closing!
Elainhe chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Well, I guess I am a little late in telling you that I like it and that I think you should try it again. ;)

You are my new addiction; as you can see, I have become rather comfortable in your lair today. :)

I loved this, the play with words and phrases (figurative to literal and sometimes even back again). I loved the structure, and I enjoyed the topic.
JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
I absolutely loved this... Amazing!

debip chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Great story-keep going girl!
jaed621 chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
This was totally beautiful and I really like the difference in style. I always admire the fact you go out on a limb to try different writing styles to see how they work for different story ideas. I think this worked out well, the sentences tell the story and the balance and repetative structure of each one gives the whole piece a nice rhythm. The story itself, sounds traumatic at first and then ends up as a happily ever after piece, that was nice. I really liked it. Well done, keep writing,

Jaed xo
LadyHeather92 chapter 1 . 10/14/2006

i love it you shall try again please

take care

Lady H.
saturn567 chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
beautiful! loved it!
chili-peppers chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
oh wow! that was briliant i loveed it! good job
SnuggleWuggles chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
This is really good! I liked it!
The Little Corinthian chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
Oh, that was great! Very nice foray into the world of CSI:NY :0P Nice job!
Beans On Toast chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
Loved it!
Mrs. Fitzgerald chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
Great job!
sugah66 chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
Ooh, very nice. I think you should try it again. ;)
Horcrux Seeker chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
I always love a man's POV-and Danny's POV was just wonderful! I loved the 'contradictory' way you had Danny explain things.

Great story-and you SHOULD try this again!
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