Reviews for Dancing in the Dark
Maron Kanzaki chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
Great story! Please continue it!
uffda1nat chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
You're a godess, as usual. I really like how the plot of the story is going and i can't wait to read future chapters! Keep writing!
starfruit06 chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
I can't help but feel giddy whenever I get a chapter alert for this story, but...HAH! I adore every chapter you write! Seriously, every chapter just gets better, and better, and better...
stargazer86 chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
"Stone floors didn’t groan…but bus boys did"

ROLF! OMG! I am trilled this updated so soon after I read it! And I love it! The lines are great!
Ebontien chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
Lovely second story you've got going. Although I adored Rhythm of the Rain, I'm enjoying Dancing in the Dark on the comedy factor alone. You are a damnable genius to introduce Song and Jin together and then throw Zuko in the middle. Though, in this chapter, I'm confused about one thing: "Neither teen heard the old men murmuring towards the back of the shop. “Oh…that Iroh…he’s good.”" So are there members of the White Lotus society that are meeting or visiting Iroh in Ba Sing Se? Or did he actually tell some of his patrons his real name?
SuperbiaLuxuria chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
Hehe, I love it. Your an awesome author, keep writing more amazing material!
charizardag chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
not a bad story. keep it up
J.M.Sage chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
lolz. no porn. ur funny. okay, one of the BEST lines this chapter that had me laughing on the floor:

"Women, men, children…it didn’t matter. All fell to the will of the tea man."

HEH. Tea man. and the other:

"Zuko slapped his hand against his forehead. Somewhere behind Iroh, a voice that sounded like the owner’s was cheerfully exclaiming. “I knew it when I saw her! I won the bet!”"

so hilarious. I loved it. What sparked you to update today? I mean, you just about never updated on Fridays... Well, at least the episode today showed us that Iroh won't have anymore Avatar chasing.
yoonalesca chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
I'm impressed

I really liked the Zuko and Katara bits

That's the best way to start out a Zutara story
Heat in Freezing chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
Oh em GEE! That was so hilarious. I lurved it! You always brighten my day with your updates.
Legacy of the Avatar chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
I love charades, but Zuko sucks at it.
kyoung mi chapter 3 . 10/13/2006
wow i love your fic! actually, i love all of your fics P they're just so original and creative and they leave me hanging and wondering what's going to happen every chapter! you're officially one of my favorite authors here on this site, and one of the best writers here on ATLA (in my opinion anyways D)

can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the great work!
Shiantor chapter 3 . 10/13/2006
Jin, Katara and Song? Ouch, that must be awkward for Zuko! This has got to be one of the best fanfics on the site! Please update soon!
Kitrazzle Fayn chapter 3 . 10/13/2006
*giggles* Okay, this is seriously cute. I'm totally loving the fact that Katara can't dance, and that you're involving all three of Zuko's possible love interests. Poor Poor Angsty Apronboy. _
TeenAnimeOtaku chapter 3 . 10/13/2006
OMG, Like awesomeness! This is turning out really good! Jin, Song, and Katara all in the same room! Old men wagering on them! lol! That's hillarious! I have been inspired to write a fic called "Zuko, The pimp" lol!
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