Reviews for Dancing in the Dark
The Narrator chapter 3 . 10/13/2006
*fumes at I WANTED to leave a review at the last chapter, but the review thingy kept blitzing. I wanted say "OMFG, THOSE LINES HAD ME ROLLING" (especially about "Master Katara") and then I got to the dancing. *spazzes* Brilliant madam, brilliant! adn Bluetara!

You fuel my fanart muse, you know that? *plots*

and Zuko's descriptions of Katara's dancing are utterly priceless. The scene with JIn and song was pure gold - I saw it all in my mind's eye and ALMOST felt sorry for Zuko. Almost.

The Narrator chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
*spewed water over her desk at the ogling Zuko's bum part* Oh man, I'm putting this in my faves right away! Thank so much for telling me you wrote this!

Iroh is as awesome as ever, i see. *grin*
hyunkelakaor chapter 3 . 10/12/2006
I liked the first chapter, and even more the third one.
shikamaru roxs my soxs chapter 3 . 10/12/2006

shikamaru's hot honey *_*
Sushi chapter 3 . 10/12/2006
Yay. Another excellent chapter. Update soon!
Anya-06 chapter 3 . 10/12/2006
if you write amazing story like this one when you are bored then you write best sellers when you're really intrest. Another great job, i feel this is going to be much entretaint than ROTR. Well cause in the other story is was a love triangule while in this one there are three girls fighting for our sweet zuzu.

Every character is original, not oc like other fictions. i could also see prefectly this story animated like a new friday night episode. I love the love-hate relationship between Zuko and Katara and then at night with the blue spirit...

Please update soon cause this is what keep me awake during my job :)
BlueSkyHeaven chapter 3 . 10/12/2006
Its brilliant that you can update everyday! its something to look forward to for us readers!
Rashaka chapter 3 . 10/11/2006
Good update, as usual. I like that Zuko's fantasy resembled any number of badly done first season capture fics. :D

I'm curious about when you say this is a PWP fic. PWP usually means "Porn Without Plot". Can we look forward to some action?

Or do you mean WIP: Work In Progress ?
Jyuami chapter 3 . 10/11/2006
yay so happy you updated today -

*Almost automatically, half the tea house replied. “It’s pronounced Moo-SHE."* ...but be a slave to fan fics...;;heh heh...

it's looking like a harem; i honestly didn't think of song joining them in ba sing se, but it makes for an interesting chapter :D. i'm looking forward to the next surprise in the next chapter. i can't wait to see where you go with this, now that there are three prospects (even though it's kxz 4ever ;))
Heat in Freezing chapter 3 . 10/11/2006
As always, insanely briliant. Keep it up!
J.M.Sage chapter 3 . 10/11/2006
! that was so good. hmm... where do u plan to go with this necklace? I'm terribly interested. I'm not gonna lie. Hm... I love it!

Heh. I just pictured Katara doing laundry on Zuko's abs and loved it. Hmm... that gives me a DeviantArt idea...
aWakingDream chapter 3 . 10/11/2006
this is great and I can't wait for the update. I heart your mad writing skills they provide for my zutara fix of the day!
ladymer chapter 3 . 10/11/2006
I kept thinking of a Tenchi Muyo! throughout the majority of this chapter when it dawned on me that Zuko has became quite a ladies man throughout this season XD Cute chapter and I love to see how this evolves, especially when Katara finds out who the masked man really is ;)
Nanyin chapter 3 . 10/11/2006
ooh someone is so hooked. phermones are in the air!
starfruit06 chapter 3 . 10/11/2006
...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *Rolling on the floor, pounding her fists* I LOVE this! Love-Love-Love it! Even though it's a PWP fic, I think it's great how you manage to make everything come together, all the randomness while keeping everyone in character. And the capture fic homage, hehehe, yes Zuko, just blame it on the hormones..mehehe..
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